05:1605:16, 1 July 2016diffhist−364
The Stars Group
Sentence was WP:OR, not citing news reports, but presenting primary source documents. Only replace if some else, in published source, says this.
00:0000:00, 1 July 2016diffhist−131
John Yang (journalist)
Not at NBC. LinkedIn is self-published, and dead link, so removed. Earlier NBC and ABCnet cites, links, same problem. No PBS content in main body, so source found and added. Most ALL other material unsrcd, so noting BLP unsrced.
13:1513:15, 30 June 2016diffhist+482
The A.B.C. Murders
→Plot summary: Translator markup filed corrected in infobox. Since "Legion" everywhere else in article, in quotes, made so in Plot summary. Resolved "name dropping" issue. Clarified story in a few other places.
20:3720:37, 29 June 2016diffhist+77
Pantera
Adding tags to article, for its pervasive issues (there are just too many to put in section or inline tags; just skim for paragraphs with NO sources at all)
20:3320:33, 29 June 2016diffhist−252
Pantera
reverting own edits; there is just too much wrong to address line by line. am adding article tags instead
18:5818:58, 29 June 2016diffhist+175
Poppers
→History: Call for more content, transition to rec drug use. One amyl wikilink enough. {{cn}} added bec WIKILINKS DON'T SATISFY policy regarding need for sourcing in WP:VERIFY. Note: angina (condition) doesn't experience pain, its afflicted do.
17:4417:44, 29 June 2016diffhist−89
Poppers
Creatd new Pharm Phys section, collecting two stray statements to put there, placing it before Chem, because people most acre about what these agents do. Subsumed "Administration" under "Use". Mvd two unsourced statements to Talk.
17:2617:26, 29 June 2016diffhist+896
Poppers
Edited chem, making clear commercial popper products not purely alkyl nitrites. Provided one lay source; EXPERT REFS STILL NEEDED. Noted nearly all chem untraceable, violates WP:VERIFY. Specific grav rmvd; jargon confusing, not germane to this article
17:0017:00, 29 June 2016diffhist−283
Poppers
→Dosage: Dosage subsection, which was wholly unsourced, and contained information essentially amounting to "how to" use advice, deleted as being non-encyclopedic, and violation other WP policy.Tag: section blanking
16:5816:58, 29 June 2016diffhist+243
Poppers
Unsourced "cap vial", not appearing/srcd in main body, rmvd from lede. Lede rewritten to better reflect article content, incl. user risks. Note, "encounters" added bec wikilink
sexual intercourse restrictively narrow, inaccurate. Unencycl F.r. dmvd
16:3016:30, 29 June 2016diffhist+2,041
Poppers
→Health issues: Rmvd redundant cites, restructured secn, separating and repeating admin info, and creating a logical development of health issue information. Added 2016 HIV risky behaviour source, and noted general need for updating, refimprove
16:5316:53, 24 June 2016diffhist+744
Mark Carney
Adding further reading, continuing to touch up citations: Reuters, Hornbrook, April 2009 bank of canada press rel (DEAD LINK REPAIR), FT Fifty, Peston, Schumpeter, Verma (RMVD REDUNDANT CITN), Schoffield "mission" (RMVD REDUNDANT), Waldie, orderofmalta
05:1605:16, 1 July 2016diffhist−364
The Stars Group
Sentence was WP:OR, not citing news reports, but presenting primary source documents. Only replace if some else, in published source, says this.
00:0000:00, 1 July 2016diffhist−131
John Yang (journalist)
Not at NBC. LinkedIn is self-published, and dead link, so removed. Earlier NBC and ABCnet cites, links, same problem. No PBS content in main body, so source found and added. Most ALL other material unsrcd, so noting BLP unsrced.
13:1513:15, 30 June 2016diffhist+482
The A.B.C. Murders
→Plot summary: Translator markup filed corrected in infobox. Since "Legion" everywhere else in article, in quotes, made so in Plot summary. Resolved "name dropping" issue. Clarified story in a few other places.
20:3720:37, 29 June 2016diffhist+77
Pantera
Adding tags to article, for its pervasive issues (there are just too many to put in section or inline tags; just skim for paragraphs with NO sources at all)
20:3320:33, 29 June 2016diffhist−252
Pantera
reverting own edits; there is just too much wrong to address line by line. am adding article tags instead
18:5818:58, 29 June 2016diffhist+175
Poppers
→History: Call for more content, transition to rec drug use. One amyl wikilink enough. {{cn}} added bec WIKILINKS DON'T SATISFY policy regarding need for sourcing in WP:VERIFY. Note: angina (condition) doesn't experience pain, its afflicted do.
17:4417:44, 29 June 2016diffhist−89
Poppers
Creatd new Pharm Phys section, collecting two stray statements to put there, placing it before Chem, because people most acre about what these agents do. Subsumed "Administration" under "Use". Mvd two unsourced statements to Talk.
17:2617:26, 29 June 2016diffhist+896
Poppers
Edited chem, making clear commercial popper products not purely alkyl nitrites. Provided one lay source; EXPERT REFS STILL NEEDED. Noted nearly all chem untraceable, violates WP:VERIFY. Specific grav rmvd; jargon confusing, not germane to this article
17:0017:00, 29 June 2016diffhist−283
Poppers
→Dosage: Dosage subsection, which was wholly unsourced, and contained information essentially amounting to "how to" use advice, deleted as being non-encyclopedic, and violation other WP policy.Tag: section blanking
16:5816:58, 29 June 2016diffhist+243
Poppers
Unsourced "cap vial", not appearing/srcd in main body, rmvd from lede. Lede rewritten to better reflect article content, incl. user risks. Note, "encounters" added bec wikilink
sexual intercourse restrictively narrow, inaccurate. Unencycl F.r. dmvd
16:3016:30, 29 June 2016diffhist+2,041
Poppers
→Health issues: Rmvd redundant cites, restructured secn, separating and repeating admin info, and creating a logical development of health issue information. Added 2016 HIV risky behaviour source, and noted general need for updating, refimprove
16:5316:53, 24 June 2016diffhist+744
Mark Carney
Adding further reading, continuing to touch up citations: Reuters, Hornbrook, April 2009 bank of canada press rel (DEAD LINK REPAIR), FT Fifty, Peston, Schumpeter, Verma (RMVD REDUNDANT CITN), Schoffield "mission" (RMVD REDUNDANT), Waldie, orderofmalta