09:3409:34, 4 June 2024diffhist−4
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Wheelchair tennis
The use of "contested" here makes it sound like the sport of controversial. "Played" is a much better and obvious word here. Also, removed comma because there is no second subject-verb in the second clause..current
13:5013:50, 12 January 2020diffhist+88
Teatro del Silenzio
"influenced" is inappropriate. "Convinced" is the correct term. Inserted additional information about the landscape setting. Corrected awkward-sounding sentence.
14:3714:37, 13 December 2019diffhist+263
New England Seamounts
→Formation: Corrections: inappropriate terms "overhead" and "harbours", "Georges Bank" does not take a definite article (the), a seamount refers to an underwater mountain, not just the peak, and I improved the overall structure and syntax of many sentences.Tag: Visual edit: Switched
16:4216:42, 23 November 2013diffhist+557
Jack Ruby
The Katzenbach memo, issued the day after LHO's assassination, is definitive proof that LHO would be presented as the killer and that he would have been convicted had there been a trial. .
09:3409:34, 4 June 2024diffhist−4
m
Wheelchair tennis
The use of "contested" here makes it sound like the sport of controversial. "Played" is a much better and obvious word here. Also, removed comma because there is no second subject-verb in the second clause..current
13:5013:50, 12 January 2020diffhist+88
Teatro del Silenzio
"influenced" is inappropriate. "Convinced" is the correct term. Inserted additional information about the landscape setting. Corrected awkward-sounding sentence.
14:3714:37, 13 December 2019diffhist+263
New England Seamounts
→Formation: Corrections: inappropriate terms "overhead" and "harbours", "Georges Bank" does not take a definite article (the), a seamount refers to an underwater mountain, not just the peak, and I improved the overall structure and syntax of many sentences.Tag: Visual edit: Switched
16:4216:42, 23 November 2013diffhist+557
Jack Ruby
The Katzenbach memo, issued the day after LHO's assassination, is definitive proof that LHO would be presented as the killer and that he would have been convicted had there been a trial. .