17:3417:34, 18 September 2021diffhist−1,707
Felipe Massa
→2008: removed a lot of judgements, opinions and trivia; fixed style and grammar errors; removed last paragraph as redundant with all the preceding
15:3515:35, 18 September 2021diffhist−24
Felipe Massa
It is incomprehensibly ridiculous to repeat someone's surname in almost every sentence. Why would anyone have written like that?
07:1007:10, 18 September 2021diffhist+381
SIDS
→Other: rewrote badly-written text about vaccination association, moved bacteria text as its position implied that vaccinations against these bacteria were being studied
17:3417:34, 18 September 2021diffhist−1,707
Felipe Massa
→2008: removed a lot of judgements, opinions and trivia; fixed style and grammar errors; removed last paragraph as redundant with all the preceding
15:3515:35, 18 September 2021diffhist−24
Felipe Massa
It is incomprehensibly ridiculous to repeat someone's surname in almost every sentence. Why would anyone have written like that?
07:1007:10, 18 September 2021diffhist+381
SIDS
→Other: rewrote badly-written text about vaccination association, moved bacteria text as its position implied that vaccinations against these bacteria were being studied