02:3102:31, 11 July 2024diffhist−115
Renata Tebaldi
→Later years: need ref for total number of performances; much cleanup: correcting punctuation, rearranging for clarity and chronology, removing self-contradictory and muddled, unsupported statements, etc; added date of death from cited sourcecurrent
17:1317:13, 9 July 2024diffhist−4
Bell Witch
rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per
MOS: ANDORTags: Mobile editMobile web edit
20:3620:36, 23 June 2024diffhist−9
Molly Kazan
rmv obstructive link pipe "|Nicholas": other names in the infobox are not similarly truncatedcurrentTags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:2621:26, 20 June 2024diffhist+2
Yma Sumac
correct ambiguous "At the same time" to "During the same period"; rmv unidiomatic "the" before "Carnegie Hall"Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
12:4512:45, 20 June 2024diffhist−5
Candice Bergen
→Personal life: rmv irrelevant "late": he was alive when she was "in a relationship with" him, and she was not involved in his death, so the fact that he died later is irrelevant hereTags: Mobile editMobile web edit
02:3102:31, 11 July 2024diffhist−115
Renata Tebaldi
→Later years: need ref for total number of performances; much cleanup: correcting punctuation, rearranging for clarity and chronology, removing self-contradictory and muddled, unsupported statements, etc; added date of death from cited sourcecurrent
17:1317:13, 9 July 2024diffhist−4
Bell Witch
rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per
MOS: ANDORTags: Mobile editMobile web edit
20:3620:36, 23 June 2024diffhist−9
Molly Kazan
rmv obstructive link pipe "|Nicholas": other names in the infobox are not similarly truncatedcurrentTags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:2621:26, 20 June 2024diffhist+2
Yma Sumac
correct ambiguous "At the same time" to "During the same period"; rmv unidiomatic "the" before "Carnegie Hall"Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
12:4512:45, 20 June 2024diffhist−5
Candice Bergen
→Personal life: rmv irrelevant "late": he was alive when she was "in a relationship with" him, and she was not involved in his death, so the fact that he died later is irrelevant hereTags: Mobile editMobile web edit