2 July 2023

• 19:29 19:29, 2 July 2023 diff hist +206‎ Talk:August Wilhelm Schlegel ‎ Just commented on the article’s need for a thorough rewrite. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14 July 2022

• 16:25 16:25, 14 July 2022 diff hist +36‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Restored some missing diacritical marks -- more should be checked and corrected! -- and removed inconsistency in the article's use of Sanskrit "sutra" vs. Pali "sutra". The Pali text titles may use "sutra," but the article is written in English and should use one English word throughout. "Sutra" is the most widely used form in English. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:03 16:03, 14 July 2022 diff hist +71‎ Madhyamaka ‎ Expanded an unexplained abbreviation ("MMK"), corrected punctuation, slight stylistic improvements Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:59 15:59, 14 July 2022 diff hist +58‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Expanded an unexplained abbreviation ("MMK") Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:56 15:56, 14 July 2022 diff hist +15‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Corrected missing diacritical marks on Sanskrit name; smoothed out awkwardness caused by the overuse of "he states" and other infelicities. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:46 15:46, 14 July 2022 diff hist +491‎ Madhyamaka ‎ Deleted bracketed interpolations in a block quotation that made the quotation much harder to understand, in part by referring to a doctrine of "links" that the article had not yet explained but seemed to be taking for granted. The interpolated brackets had also sharply (and in my view not just unnecessarily but also incorrectly) narrowed Nâgârjuna's meaning. After this, clarity also required adding in a few explanatory phrases to follow and elucidate the quotation more helpfully. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:14 15:14, 14 July 2022 diff hist −7‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Cleaned up punctuation and streamlined style (e.g., the overreliance on the clumsy phrase "he states that" to introduce quotation after quotation, when a colon does the trick better). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:02 15:02, 14 July 2022 diff hist +142‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Emended punctuation for clarity and tweaked wording slightly for the same purpose Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 14:50 14:50, 14 July 2022 diff hist +50‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Corrected minor punctuation to help clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 14:43 14:43, 14 July 2022 diff hist +9‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Corrected comma-splice errors and other minor mechanics Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 14:31 14:31, 14 July 2022 diff hist −2‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Corrected misspelling Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 14:29 14:29, 14 July 2022 diff hist +10‎ m Madhyamaka ‎ Added a couple words to remove possible misreading (to clarify what was meant) Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 February 2022

• 05:03 05:03, 11 February 2022 diff hist +2,207‎ Talk:Social degeneration ‎ →‎dubious racial terms; incoherence: new section
• 04:38 04:38, 11 February 2022 diff hist −2‎ m User:2fennario ‎ punctuation current Tag: Visual edit

9 October 2021

• 09:44 09:44, 9 October 2021 diff hist +205‎ Talk:Kotzebue (noble family) ‎ →‎Needs revision - poor English: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

19 September 2021

• 16:53 16:53, 19 September 2021 diff hist +2,039‎ Talk:Standard German ‎ →‎Northward spread of standard pronunciation?

12 September 2021

• 20:54 20:54, 12 September 2021 diff hist −31‎ m Piracetam ‎ Emended a tautologous sentence (“are very few and have been found to be few…”) Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

29 August 2021

• 03:16 03:16, 29 August 2021 diff hist +985‎ Talk:Shasta Abbey ‎No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

8 June 2021

• 22:02 22:02, 8 June 2021 diff hist +37‎ m Bronze Age ‎ The dates of the Age should be spelled out at the top of the article, not withheld till several paragraphs in. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 June 2021

• 01:50 01:50, 5 June 2021 diff hist +1,610‎ Talk:Julian of Norwich ‎ →‎Errors of fact, and hagiography in lieu of description.: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:26 01:26, 5 June 2021 diff hist +8‎ Talk:Julian of Norwich ‎ The article is by no means “good,” and I am startled that it could be thought good. It needs to be stringently edited for clarity and focus, by someone other than those who wrote it. I am not the one to assess its accuracy or neutrality, even, but I do know when work by an inexperienced writer really needs the hand of a seasoned writer/editor. My sense is also that the balance given to different topics needs rectifying if it is to become a good article. For example, opening with a leng... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

12 March 2021

• 04:07 04:07, 12 March 2021 diff hist +675‎ N User talk:2fennario ‎ →‎Genetics section needs synthesis: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

10 March 2021

• 13:41 13:41, 10 March 2021 diff hist −32‎ m Weight class ‎ Improved and streamlined clumsy phrasing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

22 February 2021

• 17:43 17:43, 22 February 2021 diff hist +721‎ Talk:Zitkala-Sa ‎ →‎To do to improve
• 17:29 17:29, 22 February 2021 diff hist +424‎ User:2fennario ‎ tweaked and elaborated my own biography by a sentence or two Tag: Visual edit

18 February 2021

• 20:09 20:09, 18 February 2021 diff hist +388‎ Das Lied von der Erde ‎ Added a reference that in an earlier edit summary I'd said I didn't know how to add (thank you, visual editing!). Also, I added the publication dates to Judith Gautier's volume (source was https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Judith_Gautier), Tag: Visual edit
• 19:52 19:52, 18 February 2021 diff hist +12‎ m Das Lied von der Erde ‎ →‎History: Just incorporating into the summary, for accuracy, the fact that the poems are multiply removed from Chinese -- Bethge freely adapted Heilmann's German version, but Heilmann knew no Chinese and merely translated from the French of two other writers, one of whom (Gautier) had herself taken many liberties and made many errors. See doi:10.2307/746721 (and my other proposed edits to this page).
• 19:33 19:33, 18 February 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Das Lied von der Erde ‎ Fixing punctuation minutiae on the edit I proposed a minute ago.
• 19:28 19:28, 18 February 2021 diff hist +17‎ Das Lied von der Erde ‎ There was a mistranslation from the German page & a misspelling. I also filled in more information from a peer-reviewed source (but I don't know how to insert references). The source is: Hamao, Fusako. "The Sources of the Texts in Mahler's "Lied Von Der Erde"." 19th-Century Music 19, no. 1 (1995). Cf. [de]: "Bethge hatte ... Heilmanns deutsche Übersetzungen der französischen Übersetzungen ... frei nachgedichtet" means "Bethge had freely adapted Heilmann's German translations of French versions."
• 18:18 18:18, 18 February 2021 diff hist +10‎ m Hans Bethge (poet) ‎ Corrected a mistranslation (from the German Wikipedia entry): "Der Bildhauer Wilhelm Lehmbruck, dessen Genie Bethge früh erkannte, hat ihn mehrfach porträtiert" means that Bethge recognied Lehmbruck's genius, not the reverse. The correction also removes the false impression that the English entry is tainted by advocacy, praising Bethge as a "genius".

26 January 2021

• 19:29 19:29, 26 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Rose-Alexandrine Barreau ‎ Added cedillas, improved wording and punctuation
• 19:21 19:21, 26 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Rose-Alexandrine Barreau ‎ added another missing acute accent
• 19:20 19:20, 26 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Rose-Alexandrine Barreau ‎ →‎Biography: added a missing acute accent, deleted unidiomatic "per" after "as"

4 August 2020

• 07:57 07:57, 4 August 2020 diff hist +1,687‎ Standard German ‎ This article is still a mess, a mix of accurate facts and uninformed opinions, as also of good clear writing and other passages that look to me to be the work of a decidedly inexperienced writer. I don't have time to provide all the references for the bits I rewrote, but the related wiki articles are generally accurate and should be consulted carefully by anyone working on this entry henceforth.
• 05:39 05:39, 4 August 2020 diff hist +8,901‎ Talk:Standard German ‎ This entry suffers from a lack of attention by qualified linguists, with too much armchair reasoning that misleads or is simply wrong. I just added a lengthy rejoinder to the most obvious error, namely the implication that standard German originates from Northern German dialects.

2 March 2020

• 12:09 12:09, 2 March 2020 diff hist +1‎ Schlegel-Tieck Prize ‎ Title of latest winning book was erroneous. Fixed to accord with footnote (and reality). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

16 November 2019

• 18:27 18:27, 16 November 2019 diff hist +747‎ Talk:A. N. Wilson ‎ →‎Bias: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 October 2019

• 15:44 15:44, 7 October 2019 diff hist +111‎ m User:2fennario ‎ added detail to my self-description Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

8 July 2019

• 00:48 00:48, 8 July 2019 diff hist +782‎ m Talk:Simbari people ‎ just commenting on the need for more info, ideally more sources (both are by one person), and above all a more neutral and less biased style.
• 00:37 00:37, 8 July 2019 diff hist +606‎ N User:2fennario ‎ Just creating a user page for myself.

2 September 2018

• 04:57 04:57, 2 September 2018 diff hist −1‎ m I'm Not Stiller ‎ fixed sentence fragment

18 March 2018

• 05:49 05:49, 18 March 2018 diff hist −8‎ m At North Farm ‎No edit summary

16 July 2015

• 02:38 02:38, 16 July 2015 diff hist +165‎ m Deutsches Wörterbuch ‎ →‎Later versions: Corrected based on German wikipedia entry and updated a link.
• 02:28 02:28, 16 July 2015 diff hist −5‎ m Deutsches Wörterbuch ‎ →‎New edition: Improved wording of my prior edit and corrected the quotation from Krauth.
• 02:23 02:23, 16 July 2015 diff hist −374‎ Deutsches Wörterbuch ‎ →‎New edition: I used material from the German entry on this subject and from the relevant websites of the research teams in Berlin and Göttingen, as well as news articles, to update.
• 01:53 01:53, 16 July 2015 diff hist +2‎ m Deutsches Wörterbuch ‎ →‎Later versions

25 April 2015

• 03:14 03:14, 25 April 2015 diff hist +4‎ m Shawn Mendes ‎ The previous writer did not know that "notoriety" only means negative attention, and so was the wrong word to use here.

2 November 2011

• 22:53 22:53, 2 November 2011 diff hist −5‎ m Death in Venice ‎ →‎Allusions
• 22:52 22:52, 2 November 2011 diff hist +924‎ Death in Venice ‎ Began correcting oversimplifications and improving style. There is some distance to go.

7 July 2011

• 16:51 16:51, 7 July 2011 diff hist +75‎ Rainer Maria Rilke ‎ →‎External links