21:4421:44, 23 January 2022diffhist+1,620
First Wikipedia edit
Top 8 citations text/format-checked. SEE <!-- re: TwoOneTwo. Demoted <ref name="gizmo"> supporting "on January 15… [WP] was launched" because source only says "first rolled out… mid-January…". Promoted <ref name="busin"> because citation actually says 15th (see quotes each citation). BUT, even "busin" deserves {{better citation}}. NOTE, because article will draw attention, we ought make it a near picture-perfect WP:GA example. I have no subject matter expertise, can only check sources, formats.
20:0020:00, 23 January 2022diffhist+19
Taylor Russell
Meant to say great job User:55eo55, adding sources to reimprov Career sect. Things done now—[A] moved full, new place-of-birth citation from infobox to main body (minor, markup tidiness); [B] returned phrase "identifies as
mixed race." Re: phrase, here's why: (i) is from that source; (ii) is used repeatedly there; (iii) source is
Byron Allen Afr-Amer publication—so sufficiently sensitive; (iv) comment sets up next colorism statement; (v) earlier out-then-in edits say "in" is consensus.
19:3819:38, 23 January 2022diffhist−50
Taylor Russell
→Career: Job probably is not quite done—the earlier mis-attributions of content to sources suggests all content needs to be checked against the earlier appearing sources—but enough progress has been made in section, so that section tag cen be removed. As I check sentences against paragraph end citations, any sentences or parts not covered can be identified by inline tags instead.
21:4421:44, 23 January 2022diffhist+1,620
First Wikipedia edit
Top 8 citations text/format-checked. SEE <!-- re: TwoOneTwo. Demoted <ref name="gizmo"> supporting "on January 15… [WP] was launched" because source only says "first rolled out… mid-January…". Promoted <ref name="busin"> because citation actually says 15th (see quotes each citation). BUT, even "busin" deserves {{better citation}}. NOTE, because article will draw attention, we ought make it a near picture-perfect WP:GA example. I have no subject matter expertise, can only check sources, formats.
20:0020:00, 23 January 2022diffhist+19
Taylor Russell
Meant to say great job User:55eo55, adding sources to reimprov Career sect. Things done now—[A] moved full, new place-of-birth citation from infobox to main body (minor, markup tidiness); [B] returned phrase "identifies as
mixed race." Re: phrase, here's why: (i) is from that source; (ii) is used repeatedly there; (iii) source is
Byron Allen Afr-Amer publication—so sufficiently sensitive; (iv) comment sets up next colorism statement; (v) earlier out-then-in edits say "in" is consensus.
19:3819:38, 23 January 2022diffhist−50
Taylor Russell
→Career: Job probably is not quite done—the earlier mis-attributions of content to sources suggests all content needs to be checked against the earlier appearing sources—but enough progress has been made in section, so that section tag cen be removed. As I check sentences against paragraph end citations, any sentences or parts not covered can be identified by inline tags instead.