12 April 2011

• 05:10 05:10, 12 April 2011 diff hist +26‎ Ron Palillo ‎ Article is overly fawning, promotional in tone, lacks sources, reads like a press release/personal web site.
• 05:05 05:05, 12 April 2011 diff hist −16‎ Ron Palillo ‎ →‎Life and career: Phrase "to name just a few" is overly casual and un-encyclopedic/innapropriate.
• 01:10 01:10, 12 April 2011 diff hist −8‎ The Dead Zone (film) ‎ →‎Plot: There was but one person taking photos during the scene, whom Stillson looks for later, the action could hardly be described "heavily" photographing the incident. Opinionary.

11 April 2011

• 01:33 01:33, 11 April 2011 diff hist −4‎ Stormy Daniels ‎ →‎Political career: Weasely term "complaining" is more opinionary than descriptive in this context. Un-encyclopedic.
• 01:24 01:24, 11 April 2011 diff hist −92‎ Mary Carey (actress) ‎ →‎Politics: Un-needed commentary about when she is eligible to run for president.
• 01:22 01:22, 11 April 2011 diff hist +3‎ Mary Carey (actress) ‎ There is no such thing as "White" ethnicity. "White" (Caucasian) refers to race.

10 April 2011

• 21:45 21:45, 10 April 2011 diff hist −1‎ Candy Apples ‎ Deleting extra period left after last edit, and the number Sabrina Johnson claimed was 500, not the 2000 originally noted.
• 21:43 21:43, 10 April 2011 diff hist −53‎ Candy Apples ‎ Sabrina Johnson later stated that she performed just 500 acts, NOT the 200 claimed, over two days with 12 male performers.

9 April 2011

• 18:26 18:26, 9 April 2011 diff hist +9‎ On Her Majesty's Secret Service (film) ‎ →‎Casting: Replacing odd sounding (in this context) "Englishman" with more appropriate sounding "British actor".
• 15:30 15:30, 9 April 2011 diff hist +7‎ Tracy Bond ‎ Re-wording for increased accuracy.

8 April 2011

• 23:29 23:29, 8 April 2011 diff hist −336‎ The Rathskeller ‎ Un-cited commentary that is akin to an advertisment complete with link to a commercial site for a restaurant in violation to Wiki policy.
• 23:26 23:26, 8 April 2011 diff hist −100‎ The Rathskeller ‎ Un-cited comments contradict information at start of sentence. If it first opened in 1974, it could not have been operative in the 1960s. Confusing/contradictory.
• 18:27 18:27, 8 April 2011 diff hist −105‎ Timothy Treadwell ‎ →‎Early life and career: Phrase "the public" infers notability at the time. There are no "runner up" titles in regards to acting auditions, you are either cast or not.
• 04:00 04:00, 8 April 2011 diff hist −256‎ Robert Smith (musician) ‎ →‎Stage persona and image: Opinionary commentary. Wholly un-encyclopedic/innapropriate.

7 April 2011

• 15:47 15:47, 7 April 2011 diff hist −21‎ Bernard Punsly ‎ →‎Career and personal life: Deleting whimsical sounding passage ("he appeared on the silver screen") from sentence. Serves no purpose/un-encyclopedic.
• 03:18 03:18, 7 April 2011 diff hist −151‎ Somerville, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Political history: Request for citation standing for 4 years. Extremely unlikely such signs were being displayed as late as 1929.
• 02:51 02:51, 7 April 2011 diff hist +1‎ Scotch (adjective) ‎ Editing mistake in spelling, I missed on last edit!
• 02:50 02:50, 7 April 2011 diff hist −1‎ Scotch (adjective) ‎ Mistake fixed
• 02:27 02:27, 7 April 2011 diff hist −54‎ Ian Buchanan ‎ Multiple issues, factual errors, omissions (he play Lawford, but write could not cite the film, not "mini-series") rambling sentences, weasely comments (he "starred" alongside, rather than "appeared in").

6 April 2011

• 03:29 03:29, 6 April 2011 diff hist +306‎ Talk:Courtney Love ‎ →‎Jewsih heritage
• 02:38 02:38, 6 April 2011 diff hist −35‎ The Brown Bunny ‎ " A handful of unknown actresses", basically meaningless phrase. Un-encyclopedic/no relevant information conveyed.

5 April 2011

• 23:48 23:48, 5 April 2011 diff hist −72‎ Cindy Jackson ‎ Un-cited, unsubstansiated comments.
• 23:47 23:47, 5 April 2011 diff hist −5‎ Cindy Jackson ‎ No need for her age in parantheses. Appropriate in infobox, but subject to change in an article.
• 22:00 22:00, 5 April 2011 diff hist −189‎ Frank De Vol ‎ →‎Acting: Opinionary sentence ("many consider") innapropriate/un-encyclopedic.
• 00:17 00:17, 5 April 2011 diff hist −261‎ Liberty dollar (private currency) ‎ →‎External links: Linked article has no direct connection to either Nothaus or the

4 April 2011

• 18:17 18:17, 4 April 2011 diff hist −180‎ Simon Collins ‎ Numerous unsourced catergories. No citation that he is a Candian citizen or of Canadian descent, as well as no source that he is bisexual. Incomplete/Un-encyclopedic.

2 April 2011

• 19:03 19:03, 2 April 2011 diff hist −11‎ Quentin Crisp ‎ →‎Influence and legacy: Stating that British society as a whole was "homophobic" is opinionary and editorialistic in this context. Un-encyclopedic.
• 17:01 17:01, 2 April 2011 diff hist −15‎ The Naked Civil Servant (film) ‎ Re-phrasing somewhat odd/confusing sounding wording ("edition has been available since") for flow, clarity.
• 07:29 07:29, 2 April 2011 diff hist +24‎ Rainn Wilson ‎ →‎Early life: Previous edit is worded as if the reader is supposed to be familiar with this, somewhat obscure, work. Dead link removed.

31 March 2011

• 06:21 06:21, 31 March 2011 diff hist −39‎ Dick York ‎ Absurd request for citation regarding York dying.

30 March 2011

• 19:11 19:11, 30 March 2011 diff hist −322‎ Andy Samberg ‎ →‎Saturday Night Live: Is this mention of one skit particularly relevant to the subject of this entry. Almost off topic.
• 18:55 18:55, 30 March 2011 diff hist +7‎ Lili Elbe ‎ Condensing run-on fragment of sentence.

29 March 2011

• 14:36 14:36, 29 March 2011 diff hist −87‎ Diana Barrymore ‎ Un-needed and totally opinionary commentary about a resemblance to her half-niece actress Drew Barrymore. Her relation to her does not need opening line mention. Proper legal birth name restored.
• 14:14 14:14, 29 March 2011 diff hist −9‎ The Neanderthal Man ‎ Opinionary comment stating that the character was "deranged". Subject to debate. Un-encyclopedic.
• 13:46 13:46, 29 March 2011 diff hist −36‎ The Flash (1990 TV series) ‎ →‎Rogues gallery: Deleting unsubstansiated/possibly opinionary commentary ("fans were pleased") Un-encyclopedic.
• 02:41 02:41, 29 March 2011 diff hist −15‎ Safe as Milk ‎ →‎Background: Deleting opinionary descriptor ("Unfortunately"). Un-encyclopedic.
• 02:15 02:15, 29 March 2011 diff hist +252‎ Talk:Arthur Brown (musician) ‎ →‎"banned in the united states"

28 March 2011

• 18:48 18:48, 28 March 2011 diff hist −15‎ Talk:George A. Romero ‎ →‎Cuban or Puerto Rican...?: He is of neither ancestry, his father's parents were Castillian immigrants to Cuba, and his mother was a Lithuanian-American. Topic header is in error
• 18:43 18:43, 28 March 2011 diff hist 0‎ Talk:George A. Romero ‎ →‎Cuban or Puerto Rican...?
• 03:23 03:23, 28 March 2011 diff hist +12‎ Catfish (film) ‎ →‎Controversy: Two people, who have no connection to the film, offering their (unsubstansiated) opinions about it truthfulness doe not constitute a "controversy" by any fair definition of the term.

25 March 2011

• 17:41 17:41, 25 March 2011 diff hist +1‎ Eddie Fisher ‎ →‎Career: Improved wording.
• 17:39 17:39, 25 March 2011 diff hist −82‎ Eddie Fisher ‎ →‎Career: Opinionary comments about singer's "depth", akin to a fan site posting. innapropriate/un-encyclopedic.

23 March 2011

• 17:36 17:36, 23 March 2011 diff hist −235‎ Herbert West ‎ →‎Re-Animator films: The film is no longer being planned!
• 04:25 04:25, 23 March 2011 diff hist −97‎ Robert Berdella ‎ →‎Death: Deleting passage that has had ciitation requested for 4 years, and noting other item is un-cited.

21 March 2011

• 14:35 14:35, 21 March 2011 diff hist 0‎ Tom Kenny ‎ →‎Musical career: Peacock wording "musical royalty".
• 13:46 13:46, 21 March 2011 diff hist −9‎ Tom Kenny ‎ →‎Musical career: Out of sequence. He appeared in the show in 1992, then took over in 1991??? Apparent mistake.
• 13:43 13:43, 21 March 2011 diff hist +20‎ Tom Kenny ‎ →‎Musical career: Original sentence was a nonsensical mess with errors in tense and grammar.

19 March 2011

• 18:29 18:29, 19 March 2011 diff hist +1‎ Savannah (actress) ‎ →‎Career and relationships: Minor edit (adding missing comma)
• 18:29 18:29, 19 March 2011 diff hist +3‎ Savannah (actress) ‎ →‎Career and relationships: Clean-up/condensing two sentences and fixing reference tags.
• 18:20 18:20, 19 March 2011 diff hist +4‎ Savanna Samson ‎ →‎Early life: "Grew up a Catholic" odd sounding grammar.