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5 December 2010
- 18:56 18:56, 5 December 2010 diff hist +2 Ken Foree →Life and career: Minor edit, period spacing.
- 18:54 18:54, 5 December 2010 diff hist −21 Ken Foree →Life and career: Needless descriptor describing 'Dawn of the Dead'. It's level of renown in popular renders this pointless akin to "'Superman', a well know comic character."
- 18:49 18:49, 5 December 2010 diff hist +9 Ken Foree →Filmography: Character's name was not simply 'Reyes', but 'Moertimer Reyes'.
4 December 2010
- 23:55 23:55, 4 December 2010 diff hist +13 The Hands of Orlac (1924 film) →Plot: Grammar/tense.
- 23:54 23:54, 4 December 2010 diff hist −49 The Hands of Orlac (1924 film) Removing opinionary comments.
3 December 2010
- 05:11 05:11, 3 December 2010 diff hist −5 Tommy Douglas →From pulpit to politics: Unclear as to what "only 19" infers in this sentence.
- 05:06 05:06, 3 December 2010 diff hist +2 Michael Therriault Odd sounding phrase "became Tommy Douglas", rather than noting he played Douglas in a television film.
29 November 2010
- 06:37 06:37, 29 November 2010 diff hist −84 Jack the Ripper (1973 TV series) →Cast: Deleting speculative comment. Opinionary, un-encyclopedic.
- 06:33 06:33, 29 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Veil (American TV series) Poor grammar ("does" the introduction).
- 05:41 05:41, 29 November 2010 diff hist −9 You, Me and Dupree →Steely Dan response: Term "equally" offers an opinion. Un-encyclopedic.
28 November 2010
- 22:31 22:31, 28 November 2010 diff hist −41 Great White (1981 film) →Plot: Deleting opinionary commentary. Un-encyclopedic.
- 05:16 05:16, 28 November 2010 diff hist +14 The Red Green Show Undid revision 399273696 by 24.62.126.170 ( talk)
- 05:15 05:15, 28 November 2010 diff hist −14 The Red Green Show →The show: Redundant. Given that the show is fiction, there is no overriding need to use the descriptor 'fictional'.
27 November 2010
- 23:07 23:07, 27 November 2010 diff hist +63 Young Maverick As with the 'Maverick' entry, this is full of opinionary commentary,and a rambling style. Needs Wikification.
- 22:50 22:50, 27 November 2010 diff hist +62 Maverick (TV series) Multiple issues: Review like, opinionary comments, incohesive writing style, rambling tone, overly long.
- 22:30 22:30, 27 November 2010 diff hist 0 Maverick (TV series) →James Garner as Bret Maverick: 'British' is the proper term, and there is no need for the hyphen.
- 17:29 17:29, 27 November 2010 diff hist +1 Something (Beatles song) Tense. Harrison is deceased.
26 November 2010
- 22:42 22:42, 26 November 2010 diff hist +6 Henry Darger →Darger's mental health: Insanity is a legal determination, not a casual descriptor.
24 November 2010
- 21:39 21:39, 24 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Red Green Show Improper tense. Show is no longer produced.
23 November 2010
- 21:45 21:45, 23 November 2010 diff hist −119 Ralph Byrd →Later life and death: Wildly speculative and un-sourced comments inferring that his television series killed him. Un-encyclopedic.
- 19:42 19:42, 23 November 2010 diff hist −18 Stephen Graham →Early life and career: Overly wordy, confusing sounding description of the actor using an accent. He did not actually "change his voice."
22 November 2010
- 17:50 17:50, 22 November 2010 diff hist −98 Horror convention →Notable horror conventions: Does not list Horror Conventions, just Sci-Fi Conventions. Irrelevant here.
21 November 2010
- 11:09 11:09, 21 November 2010 diff hist +9 Jean Harris Tag added noting that the neutrality of this entry is disputed.Numerous passages appear to advocate, explain, or speak for the subject's motives and feelings.
- 10:51 10:51, 21 November 2010 diff hist −221 Jean Harris →Legal defense and trial: Deleting un-cited claim after long standing citation request did not result in such.
- 10:42 10:42, 21 November 2010 diff hist −333 Jean Harris →Events of March 10, 1980: Deleting unsubstansiated opinionary commentary, as well as overly florid, almost melodramatic, passages which are clearly not neutral in tone. Un-encyclopedic/based.
- 10:36 10:36, 21 November 2010 diff hist −114 Jean Harris →Life with Tarnower: Solely opinionary comments, un-cited, blog-like. Conclusionary, un-encyclopedic.
- 10:34 10:34, 21 November 2010 diff hist −104 Jean Harris →Life with Tarnower: Highly innapropriate, opinionary comments appearing regarding the deceadant's conduct (calling actions "callous" other weasal terms) Advocating.Un-encyclopedic.
- 00:15 00:15, 21 November 2010 diff hist −86 SpiderBabe →External links: Dead link
18 November 2010
- 10:28 10:28, 18 November 2010 diff hist −1 Liev Schreiber →Early life: 'Kidnap' is a legal determination, not a casual descriptor of an action. Schreiber's father has never been charged with or convicted of kidnapping. Potentially libelous comment.
- 10:21 10:21, 18 November 2010 diff hist +8 Fair Game (2010 film) →Critical reception: Previous wording infers that the reviews were universally positive, which is not the case as the 80% on Rotten Tomatoes testifies to.
- 08:28 08:28, 18 November 2010 diff hist −132 Uffie →External links: No mentions or citations regarding her ancestry, nor any indication or mention of her having French citizenship, only of her residing there.
- 08:06 08:06, 18 November 2010 diff hist −30 Nikki Cox →Career: Changed tense, the film has been released and shown on cable television.
- 08:03 08:03, 18 November 2010 diff hist −7 Lonely Street (film) →Plot summary: Deleting nonsensical series of letters.
17 November 2010
- 07:29 07:29, 17 November 2010 diff hist −88 Sandrine Voillet Innapropriate and opinionary comments ("her undoubtedly good looks"). Un-encyclopedic.
13 November 2010
- 22:52 22:52, 13 November 2010 diff hist −34 2 Live Crew →Post-controversy: The existing discography clearly establishes this as their first live album. Citation request essentially pointless.
- 07:58 07:58, 13 November 2010 diff hist −6 Leon Hendrix Innapropriate narrative descriptor "sadly". Un-encyclopedic.
12 November 2010
- 11:34 11:34, 12 November 2010 diff hist +1 Rain Man →Plot: As a young child, he actually did "know". He had no clear memories of the relationship as an adult. Previous entry was technically incorrect.
- 08:42 08:42, 12 November 2010 diff hist −6 The New Odd Couple →Synopsis: Needless descriptor in "still kept". Single term kept is sufficient to establish meaning.
7 November 2010
- 05:13 05:13, 7 November 2010 diff hist −36 Jeanne Calment →Recognition: Confirmed age of 114 at the time of her film debut, no need for further citation.
6 November 2010
- 23:18 23:18, 6 November 2010 diff hist −11 Biff Tannen →Back to the Future Part II: Word " ironically" used incorrectly.
- 18:01 18:01, 6 November 2010 diff hist +9 Jonathan Alter →External links: 'Jon Alter' could be potentially confusing. He is known professionally as Jonathan.
5 November 2010
- 19:24 19:24, 5 November 2010 diff hist −53 Kay Francis →Early life: Smith was not in films until 1941 and Bergman was not a Hollywood star until the very late 1930s. Irrelevant, off-topic and un-cited as well.
- 06:17 06:17, 5 November 2010 diff hist −1 Betty Grable →Early life: The editor's opinion of what is, and what is not, possible is not relevant nor appropriate in this entry. Un-encyclopedic.
- 00:52 00:52, 5 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Real Paper →External links: Wrong link - html not htm. When you put a link up, check that it's working rather than leaving work for other people.
3 November 2010
- 11:07 11:07, 3 November 2010 diff hist +11 Jerry Brown Previous wording states this as an absolute certainty to the exclsusion of all other possibilities. The wording should be accurate to the present.
2 November 2010
- 11:19 11:19, 2 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Brute Man Incorrect tense.
- 10:52 10:52, 2 November 2010 diff hist −6 Charles McGraw " Small, uncredited roles" by unknown actors in their first film, are not "cameos" by any reasonable definition. Innacurate term.
- 10:20 10:20, 2 November 2010 diff hist −45 Casablanca (film) →Colorization: Deleting opinionary, un-cited comments that the film was "unpopular with purists". Review like. Un-encyclopedic.
- 10:17 10:17, 2 November 2010 diff hist −5 Casablanca (film) →Colorization: "Only" serves a peacock term in this context, in the absence of other comparable numeric data it is purely speculative that the viewship was insignificant.
- 10:09 10:09, 2 November 2010 diff hist +3 Kings Row →Plot summary: He was billed as 'Robert' not 'Bob' in the film. Un-encyclopedic.
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5 December 2010
- 18:56 18:56, 5 December 2010 diff hist +2 Ken Foree →Life and career: Minor edit, period spacing.
- 18:54 18:54, 5 December 2010 diff hist −21 Ken Foree →Life and career: Needless descriptor describing 'Dawn of the Dead'. It's level of renown in popular renders this pointless akin to "'Superman', a well know comic character."
- 18:49 18:49, 5 December 2010 diff hist +9 Ken Foree →Filmography: Character's name was not simply 'Reyes', but 'Moertimer Reyes'.
4 December 2010
- 23:55 23:55, 4 December 2010 diff hist +13 The Hands of Orlac (1924 film) →Plot: Grammar/tense.
- 23:54 23:54, 4 December 2010 diff hist −49 The Hands of Orlac (1924 film) Removing opinionary comments.
3 December 2010
- 05:11 05:11, 3 December 2010 diff hist −5 Tommy Douglas →From pulpit to politics: Unclear as to what "only 19" infers in this sentence.
- 05:06 05:06, 3 December 2010 diff hist +2 Michael Therriault Odd sounding phrase "became Tommy Douglas", rather than noting he played Douglas in a television film.
29 November 2010
- 06:37 06:37, 29 November 2010 diff hist −84 Jack the Ripper (1973 TV series) →Cast: Deleting speculative comment. Opinionary, un-encyclopedic.
- 06:33 06:33, 29 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Veil (American TV series) Poor grammar ("does" the introduction).
- 05:41 05:41, 29 November 2010 diff hist −9 You, Me and Dupree →Steely Dan response: Term "equally" offers an opinion. Un-encyclopedic.
28 November 2010
- 22:31 22:31, 28 November 2010 diff hist −41 Great White (1981 film) →Plot: Deleting opinionary commentary. Un-encyclopedic.
- 05:16 05:16, 28 November 2010 diff hist +14 The Red Green Show Undid revision 399273696 by 24.62.126.170 ( talk)
- 05:15 05:15, 28 November 2010 diff hist −14 The Red Green Show →The show: Redundant. Given that the show is fiction, there is no overriding need to use the descriptor 'fictional'.
27 November 2010
- 23:07 23:07, 27 November 2010 diff hist +63 Young Maverick As with the 'Maverick' entry, this is full of opinionary commentary,and a rambling style. Needs Wikification.
- 22:50 22:50, 27 November 2010 diff hist +62 Maverick (TV series) Multiple issues: Review like, opinionary comments, incohesive writing style, rambling tone, overly long.
- 22:30 22:30, 27 November 2010 diff hist 0 Maverick (TV series) →James Garner as Bret Maverick: 'British' is the proper term, and there is no need for the hyphen.
- 17:29 17:29, 27 November 2010 diff hist +1 Something (Beatles song) Tense. Harrison is deceased.
26 November 2010
- 22:42 22:42, 26 November 2010 diff hist +6 Henry Darger →Darger's mental health: Insanity is a legal determination, not a casual descriptor.
24 November 2010
- 21:39 21:39, 24 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Red Green Show Improper tense. Show is no longer produced.
23 November 2010
- 21:45 21:45, 23 November 2010 diff hist −119 Ralph Byrd →Later life and death: Wildly speculative and un-sourced comments inferring that his television series killed him. Un-encyclopedic.
- 19:42 19:42, 23 November 2010 diff hist −18 Stephen Graham →Early life and career: Overly wordy, confusing sounding description of the actor using an accent. He did not actually "change his voice."
22 November 2010
- 17:50 17:50, 22 November 2010 diff hist −98 Horror convention →Notable horror conventions: Does not list Horror Conventions, just Sci-Fi Conventions. Irrelevant here.
21 November 2010
- 11:09 11:09, 21 November 2010 diff hist +9 Jean Harris Tag added noting that the neutrality of this entry is disputed.Numerous passages appear to advocate, explain, or speak for the subject's motives and feelings.
- 10:51 10:51, 21 November 2010 diff hist −221 Jean Harris →Legal defense and trial: Deleting un-cited claim after long standing citation request did not result in such.
- 10:42 10:42, 21 November 2010 diff hist −333 Jean Harris →Events of March 10, 1980: Deleting unsubstansiated opinionary commentary, as well as overly florid, almost melodramatic, passages which are clearly not neutral in tone. Un-encyclopedic/based.
- 10:36 10:36, 21 November 2010 diff hist −114 Jean Harris →Life with Tarnower: Solely opinionary comments, un-cited, blog-like. Conclusionary, un-encyclopedic.
- 10:34 10:34, 21 November 2010 diff hist −104 Jean Harris →Life with Tarnower: Highly innapropriate, opinionary comments appearing regarding the deceadant's conduct (calling actions "callous" other weasal terms) Advocating.Un-encyclopedic.
- 00:15 00:15, 21 November 2010 diff hist −86 SpiderBabe →External links: Dead link
18 November 2010
- 10:28 10:28, 18 November 2010 diff hist −1 Liev Schreiber →Early life: 'Kidnap' is a legal determination, not a casual descriptor of an action. Schreiber's father has never been charged with or convicted of kidnapping. Potentially libelous comment.
- 10:21 10:21, 18 November 2010 diff hist +8 Fair Game (2010 film) →Critical reception: Previous wording infers that the reviews were universally positive, which is not the case as the 80% on Rotten Tomatoes testifies to.
- 08:28 08:28, 18 November 2010 diff hist −132 Uffie →External links: No mentions or citations regarding her ancestry, nor any indication or mention of her having French citizenship, only of her residing there.
- 08:06 08:06, 18 November 2010 diff hist −30 Nikki Cox →Career: Changed tense, the film has been released and shown on cable television.
- 08:03 08:03, 18 November 2010 diff hist −7 Lonely Street (film) →Plot summary: Deleting nonsensical series of letters.
17 November 2010
- 07:29 07:29, 17 November 2010 diff hist −88 Sandrine Voillet Innapropriate and opinionary comments ("her undoubtedly good looks"). Un-encyclopedic.
13 November 2010
- 22:52 22:52, 13 November 2010 diff hist −34 2 Live Crew →Post-controversy: The existing discography clearly establishes this as their first live album. Citation request essentially pointless.
- 07:58 07:58, 13 November 2010 diff hist −6 Leon Hendrix Innapropriate narrative descriptor "sadly". Un-encyclopedic.
12 November 2010
- 11:34 11:34, 12 November 2010 diff hist +1 Rain Man →Plot: As a young child, he actually did "know". He had no clear memories of the relationship as an adult. Previous entry was technically incorrect.
- 08:42 08:42, 12 November 2010 diff hist −6 The New Odd Couple →Synopsis: Needless descriptor in "still kept". Single term kept is sufficient to establish meaning.
7 November 2010
- 05:13 05:13, 7 November 2010 diff hist −36 Jeanne Calment →Recognition: Confirmed age of 114 at the time of her film debut, no need for further citation.
6 November 2010
- 23:18 23:18, 6 November 2010 diff hist −11 Biff Tannen →Back to the Future Part II: Word " ironically" used incorrectly.
- 18:01 18:01, 6 November 2010 diff hist +9 Jonathan Alter →External links: 'Jon Alter' could be potentially confusing. He is known professionally as Jonathan.
5 November 2010
- 19:24 19:24, 5 November 2010 diff hist −53 Kay Francis →Early life: Smith was not in films until 1941 and Bergman was not a Hollywood star until the very late 1930s. Irrelevant, off-topic and un-cited as well.
- 06:17 06:17, 5 November 2010 diff hist −1 Betty Grable →Early life: The editor's opinion of what is, and what is not, possible is not relevant nor appropriate in this entry. Un-encyclopedic.
- 00:52 00:52, 5 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Real Paper →External links: Wrong link - html not htm. When you put a link up, check that it's working rather than leaving work for other people.
3 November 2010
- 11:07 11:07, 3 November 2010 diff hist +11 Jerry Brown Previous wording states this as an absolute certainty to the exclsusion of all other possibilities. The wording should be accurate to the present.
2 November 2010
- 11:19 11:19, 2 November 2010 diff hist +1 The Brute Man Incorrect tense.
- 10:52 10:52, 2 November 2010 diff hist −6 Charles McGraw " Small, uncredited roles" by unknown actors in their first film, are not "cameos" by any reasonable definition. Innacurate term.
- 10:20 10:20, 2 November 2010 diff hist −45 Casablanca (film) →Colorization: Deleting opinionary, un-cited comments that the film was "unpopular with purists". Review like. Un-encyclopedic.
- 10:17 10:17, 2 November 2010 diff hist −5 Casablanca (film) →Colorization: "Only" serves a peacock term in this context, in the absence of other comparable numeric data it is purely speculative that the viewship was insignificant.
- 10:09 10:09, 2 November 2010 diff hist +3 Kings Row →Plot summary: He was billed as 'Robert' not 'Bob' in the film. Un-encyclopedic.
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