18:4418:44, 4 July 2009diffhist−302
Ritz Brothers
→Movie career: Deleting entirely opinionary paragraph with writer announcing his/her opinion of what was their worst film. Innapropriate, review like, un-encyclopedic.
18:4018:40, 4 July 2009diffhist−6
Ritz Brothers
The Ritz Brothers did not appear in films only in the 1930s as the phrasing inferred. Innacuarate descriptor removed.
07:1807:18, 2 July 2009diffhist−2
Detour (1945 film)
→Plot: "The Stranger", "The owner of the car"?? Haskell's name is known and mentioned many times by the lead characters. Lazy writing, Un-encyclopedic.
06:2706:27, 28 June 2009diffhist−171
Stiltskin
→Line-up: Credits musicians with track credits in the lineup, which is album information not needed here, and never mentions albums tracks are from in any case.
06:2106:21, 28 June 2009diffhist−79
Stiltskin
→Career: Very biased and overtly so. Implies the current lineup is not really Stiltskin, referencing original in past tense. Opinion bordering on vandalism, un-encyclopedic.
18:4418:44, 4 July 2009diffhist−302
Ritz Brothers
→Movie career: Deleting entirely opinionary paragraph with writer announcing his/her opinion of what was their worst film. Innapropriate, review like, un-encyclopedic.
18:4018:40, 4 July 2009diffhist−6
Ritz Brothers
The Ritz Brothers did not appear in films only in the 1930s as the phrasing inferred. Innacuarate descriptor removed.
07:1807:18, 2 July 2009diffhist−2
Detour (1945 film)
→Plot: "The Stranger", "The owner of the car"?? Haskell's name is known and mentioned many times by the lead characters. Lazy writing, Un-encyclopedic.
06:2706:27, 28 June 2009diffhist−171
Stiltskin
→Line-up: Credits musicians with track credits in the lineup, which is album information not needed here, and never mentions albums tracks are from in any case.
06:2106:21, 28 June 2009diffhist−79
Stiltskin
→Career: Very biased and overtly so. Implies the current lineup is not really Stiltskin, referencing original in past tense. Opinion bordering on vandalism, un-encyclopedic.