14:5514:55, 8 September 2017diffhist−5
Bre-X
The body having been eaten by animals is "in addition" to the other damage, not "on the other hand."Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
15:1015:10, 7 August 2017diffhist−75
Golden Krust
The "nine varieties of patties" was already mentioned earlier on the page, and certainly does not belong in a paragraph on who the customers are.Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
21:2421:24, 24 April 2017diffhist−2
Galway
Instead of "experiencing a lack of temperature extremes" it is a lot simpler and more direct to say "does not experience temperature extremes."Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
15:4715:47, 17 March 2017diffhist−298
John Coltrane
First two sentences of paragraph on marriage to Alice simply repeated information from the previous paragraph.Tags: references removedMobile editMobile app edit
01:5201:52, 22 December 2016diffhist−15
Wadi
"Times of simply water" doesn't make any sense. If something else was meant, it should be reformulated.Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
14:5514:55, 8 September 2017diffhist−5
Bre-X
The body having been eaten by animals is "in addition" to the other damage, not "on the other hand."Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
15:1015:10, 7 August 2017diffhist−75
Golden Krust
The "nine varieties of patties" was already mentioned earlier on the page, and certainly does not belong in a paragraph on who the customers are.Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
21:2421:24, 24 April 2017diffhist−2
Galway
Instead of "experiencing a lack of temperature extremes" it is a lot simpler and more direct to say "does not experience temperature extremes."Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit
15:4715:47, 17 March 2017diffhist−298
John Coltrane
First two sentences of paragraph on marriage to Alice simply repeated information from the previous paragraph.Tags: references removedMobile editMobile app edit
01:5201:52, 22 December 2016diffhist−15
Wadi
"Times of simply water" doesn't make any sense. If something else was meant, it should be reformulated.Tags: Mobile editMobile app edit