15:0915:09, 20 April 2008diffhist+691
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Talk:Battery indicator
←Created page with '== Clarify rewrite request == This article is misleading and incorrect. Not all battery indicators are diagnostics. Not all battery diagnostics use visual indicato...'
12:4912:49, 20 April 2008diffhist−583
Dibber
Once again, removes vandalism by KennedyAnn. Kennedy, your comments are funny, but they belong on the discussion page, ok?
12:4512:45, 20 April 2008diffhist+35
KRXQ
Not advertising, granted, but does need citations from someplace else than the radio's PR department.
12:0212:02, 20 April 2008diffhist−370
Lettuce
John Waters is not an authority on food. It would be ridiculous to put a quote from every writer who ever expressed an opinion on how lettuce tastes, especially one, as in this case, which was a joke.
11:5111:51, 20 April 2008diffhist−123
Pipeline Masters
Removes unprovable, subjective peacock sentence "Glamorized in nearly every surf video and book, the competition's reputation yields great honor and prestige to its winners."
11:4211:42, 20 April 2008diffhist−106
Branding iron
Removes citation which does not verify text, but instead is commercial site. Removes another commerical link to steak branding irons which has no educational content.
11:2111:21, 20 April 2008diffhist+50
Pipeline Bodysurfing Classic
This article is an absymal combination of self-advertising, peacock language, and vague slurs against the City and Country of Honolulu. Stick with the facts about the competition.
10:2110:21, 20 April 2008diffhist−87
West London Wildcats
Removes completely inappropriate and subjective phrases "all round good guy" and "legendary nudist and the greatest Wildcats President in living memory".
10:1610:16, 20 April 2008diffhist−260
Muraenosaurus
Removes computer game reference. The game animal would be triva, at best, and seems inappropriate entirely since apparently it has nothing to do with the animal in the article.
09:3609:36, 20 April 2008diffhist−41
Bukit Nanas
How could a forest be proved to be millions of years old, when oldest trees are a few thousand? Removed, unless citation can be given.
07:2307:23, 20 April 2008diffhist+112
Margao
Quite a few statements in article are contrary to style guide WP:PEACOCK, or need citations which are not associated with Margao's tourist industry.
15:0915:09, 20 April 2008diffhist+691
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Talk:Battery indicator
←Created page with '== Clarify rewrite request == This article is misleading and incorrect. Not all battery indicators are diagnostics. Not all battery diagnostics use visual indicato...'
12:4912:49, 20 April 2008diffhist−583
Dibber
Once again, removes vandalism by KennedyAnn. Kennedy, your comments are funny, but they belong on the discussion page, ok?
12:4512:45, 20 April 2008diffhist+35
KRXQ
Not advertising, granted, but does need citations from someplace else than the radio's PR department.
12:0212:02, 20 April 2008diffhist−370
Lettuce
John Waters is not an authority on food. It would be ridiculous to put a quote from every writer who ever expressed an opinion on how lettuce tastes, especially one, as in this case, which was a joke.
11:5111:51, 20 April 2008diffhist−123
Pipeline Masters
Removes unprovable, subjective peacock sentence "Glamorized in nearly every surf video and book, the competition's reputation yields great honor and prestige to its winners."
11:4211:42, 20 April 2008diffhist−106
Branding iron
Removes citation which does not verify text, but instead is commercial site. Removes another commerical link to steak branding irons which has no educational content.
11:2111:21, 20 April 2008diffhist+50
Pipeline Bodysurfing Classic
This article is an absymal combination of self-advertising, peacock language, and vague slurs against the City and Country of Honolulu. Stick with the facts about the competition.
10:2110:21, 20 April 2008diffhist−87
West London Wildcats
Removes completely inappropriate and subjective phrases "all round good guy" and "legendary nudist and the greatest Wildcats President in living memory".
10:1610:16, 20 April 2008diffhist−260
Muraenosaurus
Removes computer game reference. The game animal would be triva, at best, and seems inappropriate entirely since apparently it has nothing to do with the animal in the article.
09:3609:36, 20 April 2008diffhist−41
Bukit Nanas
How could a forest be proved to be millions of years old, when oldest trees are a few thousand? Removed, unless citation can be given.
07:2307:23, 20 April 2008diffhist+112
Margao
Quite a few statements in article are contrary to style guide WP:PEACOCK, or need citations which are not associated with Margao's tourist industry.