22:3022:30, 18 May 2013diffhist+95
Fahrenheit 9/11 controversies
Hitchens was a big critic of George Bush so here's his critique of the film. "frequently" doesn't need to be specifically sourced as it's reflected in the body of the article
08:4508:45, 17 May 2013diffhist−28
Salvation in Christianity
It's not archaic language. This is frequently used today. Also, your change in some parts inexplicably changes the meaning of what Scripture says or sources say of Scripture
08:3708:37, 17 May 2013diffhist−8
Fahrenheit 9/11 controversies
the source may say that, but the lead doesn't always need sourcing if the text is to be found in the main body. In this case, the main body shows that it goes beyond those people
22:3022:30, 18 May 2013diffhist+95
Fahrenheit 9/11 controversies
Hitchens was a big critic of George Bush so here's his critique of the film. "frequently" doesn't need to be specifically sourced as it's reflected in the body of the article
08:4508:45, 17 May 2013diffhist−28
Salvation in Christianity
It's not archaic language. This is frequently used today. Also, your change in some parts inexplicably changes the meaning of what Scripture says or sources say of Scripture
08:3708:37, 17 May 2013diffhist−8
Fahrenheit 9/11 controversies
the source may say that, but the lead doesn't always need sourcing if the text is to be found in the main body. In this case, the main body shows that it goes beyond those people