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Talk:Sky Cubacub
←Created page with 'This sounds awesome! You gave a really nice summary of who they are without overcomplicating. I dont have much to critique on what you have written. Just make sure to add your references and possibly some links such as SAIC,PCOS, and their other disabilities ect.'
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User talk:GraceRequejo/Mira Nakashima
←Created page with 'I would make sure to add a lead paragraph. The beginning feels a bit abrupt.It may help to mention her name in the opening sentence just so the reader knows who you are writing about, instead of starting with "she". otherwise, everything is very nicely written. Your sources and links look good as well.'current
21:1221:12, 12 October 2021diffhist+263
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Talk:Sky Cubacub
←Created page with 'This sounds awesome! You gave a really nice summary of who they are without overcomplicating. I dont have much to critique on what you have written. Just make sure to add your references and possibly some links such as SAIC,PCOS, and their other disabilities ect.'
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User talk:GraceRequejo/Mira Nakashima
←Created page with 'I would make sure to add a lead paragraph. The beginning feels a bit abrupt.It may help to mention her name in the opening sentence just so the reader knows who you are writing about, instead of starting with "she". otherwise, everything is very nicely written. Your sources and links look good as well.'current