14:2414:24, 29 October 2018diffhist−5
Kalamazoo, Michigan
→Education: "several" doesn't accurately reflect what the source article stated (and what indeed came to pass): 15 private Michigan colleges are Promise-eligible. "Several" seems to imply three or four, making it the wrong word here.
18:3618:36, 9 May 2018diffhist+4
Triple Gold Club
This appearance (following Crosby's captaining of triple gold teams, and mentioning Datsyuk's captaining of the Olympic team) suggests that Datsyuk has captained all three of his winning teams. As much as I'd like this to be true, he has never captained an NHL team. You can clarify by just moving this earlier and away from the "captain" section.
14:2414:24, 29 October 2018diffhist−5
Kalamazoo, Michigan
→Education: "several" doesn't accurately reflect what the source article stated (and what indeed came to pass): 15 private Michigan colleges are Promise-eligible. "Several" seems to imply three or four, making it the wrong word here.
18:3618:36, 9 May 2018diffhist+4
Triple Gold Club
This appearance (following Crosby's captaining of triple gold teams, and mentioning Datsyuk's captaining of the Olympic team) suggests that Datsyuk has captained all three of his winning teams. As much as I'd like this to be true, he has never captained an NHL team. You can clarify by just moving this earlier and away from the "captain" section.