03:2903:29, 22 May 2013diffhist+42
Bikini
Improper lead sentence: Was defining a term rather than introducing a concrete topic (and the definition provided was not sufficiently specific)
01:4501:45, 22 May 2013diffhist+48
Pole dance
Modified revision 556175663 by
Begoon (
talk); the context is essential to the lead sentence so please do not remove; removing the transition into the next sentence makes the flow worse but ok ...
02:4302:43, 12 April 2013diffhist−6
Roaring Twenties
1920s either is or is not a synonym for this article: If it is then it should not be linked to another article; if it is not then it should not be bold
04:1204:12, 1 April 2013diffhist+46
Stealth aircraft
Restructured lead sentence: Using "stealth" twice in the first few words is like saying "a race car is a car that races"
01:3001:30, 26 March 2013diffhist+23
Hugs and kisses
There is no evidence that that the ancient Christian symbol is in any way related to the XOXO; this is purely a side discussion
03:2903:29, 22 May 2013diffhist+42
Bikini
Improper lead sentence: Was defining a term rather than introducing a concrete topic (and the definition provided was not sufficiently specific)
01:4501:45, 22 May 2013diffhist+48
Pole dance
Modified revision 556175663 by
Begoon (
talk); the context is essential to the lead sentence so please do not remove; removing the transition into the next sentence makes the flow worse but ok ...
02:4302:43, 12 April 2013diffhist−6
Roaring Twenties
1920s either is or is not a synonym for this article: If it is then it should not be linked to another article; if it is not then it should not be bold
04:1204:12, 1 April 2013diffhist+46
Stealth aircraft
Restructured lead sentence: Using "stealth" twice in the first few words is like saying "a race car is a car that races"
01:3001:30, 26 March 2013diffhist+23
Hugs and kisses
There is no evidence that that the ancient Christian symbol is in any way related to the XOXO; this is purely a side discussion