16:5716:57, 5 March 2020diffhist−6
Solomon
Changed the clumsy and grammatically poor "would break apart" with the better past-tense "broke." Never write about the past using the future tense.
16:5716:57, 5 March 2020diffhist−6
Solomon
Changed the clumsy and grammatically poor "would break apart" with the better past-tense "broke." Never write about the past using the future tense.