18:1918:19, 10 August 2015diffhist+1
Johiya
The first sentence began with "Joiya or Joiya is a....". It said the exact same name twice. The alternate spelling is Johiya, so I replaced one of the Joiya's with Johiya.
22:0722:07, 18 June 2015diffhist+69
Charleston church shooting
→Reactions: lamented is good because it's descriptive. Also, stop tweaking this bit, it sounds good as is. The bit about salvation doesn't flow well without the lines after, which make the quote much longer.
21:3121:31, 18 June 2015diffhist+25
Charleston church shooting
→Reactions: Shortened the reaction by Paul. He was in SC this week. His comments relate directly to this event as well as the larger narratives of racial tensions, gun control, and equal justice.
18:1918:19, 10 August 2015diffhist+1
Johiya
The first sentence began with "Joiya or Joiya is a....". It said the exact same name twice. The alternate spelling is Johiya, so I replaced one of the Joiya's with Johiya.
22:0722:07, 18 June 2015diffhist+69
Charleston church shooting
→Reactions: lamented is good because it's descriptive. Also, stop tweaking this bit, it sounds good as is. The bit about salvation doesn't flow well without the lines after, which make the quote much longer.
21:3121:31, 18 June 2015diffhist+25
Charleston church shooting
→Reactions: Shortened the reaction by Paul. He was in SC this week. His comments relate directly to this event as well as the larger narratives of racial tensions, gun control, and equal justice.