11:2711:27, 12 July 2022diffhist−49
Miyamoto (crater)
Suggestions for simplicity, style. (Proportional fonts have embedded kerning tables for optimal spacing, so manual double-spacing of sentences isn't necessary.)Tag: Visual edit
12:0712:07, 5 June 2022diffhist−30
Grace VanderWaal
→Reputation and accolades: Suggestions for simplicity, style. • It's not necessary to keep citing the subject's name within the same paragraph, except where it's necessary to avoid ambiguity. • "Accumulated" is usually used to refer to things (e.g. wealth, prizes), not people, for which it sounds somewhat clinical. Cheers!Tag: Visual edit
04:5404:54, 9 March 2022diffhist−357
The Marvelous Mrs. Maisel
→Season 4 (2022): Suggestions for simplicity & not giving away the whole game. I've suggested removing spoilers from this synopsis. Traditionally, episode synopses present each sub-plot's initiating events, not how they resolve. (I mean, you may as well not see the show, right?)
11:2711:27, 12 July 2022diffhist−49
Miyamoto (crater)
Suggestions for simplicity, style. (Proportional fonts have embedded kerning tables for optimal spacing, so manual double-spacing of sentences isn't necessary.)Tag: Visual edit
12:0712:07, 5 June 2022diffhist−30
Grace VanderWaal
→Reputation and accolades: Suggestions for simplicity, style. • It's not necessary to keep citing the subject's name within the same paragraph, except where it's necessary to avoid ambiguity. • "Accumulated" is usually used to refer to things (e.g. wealth, prizes), not people, for which it sounds somewhat clinical. Cheers!Tag: Visual edit
04:5404:54, 9 March 2022diffhist−357
The Marvelous Mrs. Maisel
→Season 4 (2022): Suggestions for simplicity & not giving away the whole game. I've suggested removing spoilers from this synopsis. Traditionally, episode synopses present each sub-plot's initiating events, not how they resolve. (I mean, you may as well not see the show, right?)