23:2923:29, 9 June 2010diffhist−425
Swing (dance)
→Forms of Swing: Cut out a paragraph that was speculation and had no connection to the associated topic. Also, used un-verifiable references like "some dancers believe" ~~~~
23 May 2010
05:4205:42, 23 May 2010diffhist−347
Judy Garland
→Leaving MGM: made paragraph more readable (took out a non-sequitor that appeared later in a list), cut out another lone sentence that was un-cited and debatebly relevant. ~~~~
22:0522:05, 27 March 2010diffhist−2,611
Closer (film)
→Plot: based on recommendations, parred down summary. Tried to keep only essential elements, and cut out analytic elements, and flowery wording~~~~
23:2923:29, 9 June 2010diffhist−425
Swing (dance)
→Forms of Swing: Cut out a paragraph that was speculation and had no connection to the associated topic. Also, used un-verifiable references like "some dancers believe" ~~~~
23 May 2010
05:4205:42, 23 May 2010diffhist−347
Judy Garland
→Leaving MGM: made paragraph more readable (took out a non-sequitor that appeared later in a list), cut out another lone sentence that was un-cited and debatebly relevant. ~~~~
22:0522:05, 27 March 2010diffhist−2,611
Closer (film)
→Plot: based on recommendations, parred down summary. Tried to keep only essential elements, and cut out analytic elements, and flowery wording~~~~