28 January 2010

• 00:00 00:00, 28 January 2010 diff hist −113‎ Northlands Coliseum ‎ External links are supposed to provide more relevant info on the subject, and be directly related to subject. One statement says "Canadian cities, such as Edmonton", that's it. Link isn't for subject.

27 January 2010

• 23:16 23:16, 27 January 2010 diff hist +4‎ Chris Chelios ‎ comma after year
• 23:07 23:07, 27 January 2010 diff hist +227‎ User talk:Djsasso ‎ →‎See Also
• 22:58 22:58, 27 January 2010 diff hist +598‎ User talk:NormanEinstein ‎ →‎Brantford, Ontario: new section
• 22:46 22:46, 27 January 2010 diff hist +909‎ User talk:Djsasso ‎ →‎NHL Entry Drafts: new section
• 22:33 22:33, 27 January 2010 diff hist −89‎ Brantford ‎ You should check to see if it is a workable link before putting it back. That was the reason I removed it to begin with.
• 22:30 22:30, 27 January 2010 diff hist +841‎ User talk:Djsasso ‎ →‎See Also: new section
• 07:42 07:42, 27 January 2010 diff hist −10‎ Dave Manson ‎No edit summary
• 07:40 07:40, 27 January 2010 diff hist −129‎ Hector Marini ‎No edit summary
• 03:49 03:49, 27 January 2010 diff hist −38‎ List of people from Ottawa ‎ Fixing alphabetical order as a few of the names had been misplaced. Also removed name that appeared twice, and fixed name that was in all capital letters.
• 03:32 03:32, 27 January 2010 diff hist +1‎ Denis Herron ‎ Wikipedia articles don't refer to people by their first name. See WP:MOSBIO
• 03:29 03:29, 27 January 2010 diff hist −21‎ Lee Fogolin ‎ →‎See also: A link to this article is already included. See WP:SEEALSO
• 03:25 03:25, 27 January 2010 diff hist +35‎ Lee Fogolin ‎ The external link should be for his page, not the homepage.
• 03:19 03:19, 27 January 2010 diff hist −7‎ Adam Creighton (ice hockey) ‎ The word former shouldn't be listed after retired.
• 03:14 03:14, 27 January 2010 diff hist +3‎ Bob McGill ‎ Wikipedia articles don't refer to people by their first name. See WP:MOSBIO
• 03:05 03:05, 27 January 2010 diff hist −22‎ National Action Party (Mexico) ‎ Touchup per WP:MOS. (Dates, comma after years, and titles before names)
• 02:26 02:26, 27 January 2010 diff hist +297‎ Brantford ‎ My mistake in last edit, three of the external links work, so I re-added them. Are these links even allowed? There all linking from a site that is already listed in the external link section.
• 02:18 02:18, 27 January 2010 diff hist −481‎ Brantford ‎ Reverting addition of several external links. The edits make no sense, there all supposed to be from the same site, but don't seem to exist. Several links from same site shouldn't be included anyways.
• 02:06 02:06, 27 January 2010 diff hist −216‎ Chris Simon ‎ Removed external link that no longer exists
• 02:04 02:04, 27 January 2010 diff hist −394‎ Dale Hunter ‎ There is no need to include this info in both the "NHL career" section, and the "Notoriety" section. If the second mention is more appropiate, it can be put back, I really didn't know which to remove.
• 01:44 01:44, 27 January 2010 diff hist −7‎ Dale Hunter ‎ Full names are only used in the opening sentence, with the last name used throughout the text of the article. Please see WP:MOSBIO.
• 01:32 01:32, 27 January 2010 diff hist 0‎ 1991 NHL entry draft ‎ "wing" doesn't start with a capital.
• 01:26 01:26, 27 January 2010 diff hist −213‎ Ivan Hlinka ‎ Removed POV. Stating you find something strange is your opinion and doesn't belong.
• 01:20 01:20, 27 January 2010 diff hist 0‎ Ivan Hlinka ‎ Touchup per WP:HEADERS.
• 01:18 01:18, 27 January 2010 diff hist −344‎ Ivan Hlinka ‎ It's wikipedia policy that full names are only used in the opening sentence of the article, with the last name used throughout ( WP:MOSBIO). Some other touch up, and removed dead external link.
• 01:00 01:00, 27 January 2010 diff hist −13‎ Daniel Berthiaume ‎ Nickname is covered in article. Unless he changed his name to include it, the nickname isn't part of his full name.

26 January 2010

• 23:11 23:11, 26 January 2010 diff hist −82‎ Billy McNeill (ice hockey) ‎ You don't to add links to a see also section when they are already linked in the text of the article. Tag: section blanking