03:2203:22, 24 December 2020diffhist+23
Grogu
Top lists do not belong in the same paragraph as "Not all reviews were positive" (I'd put it with Awards if there was section.)
02:1002:10, 24 December 2020diffhist−11
Transformers: Age of Extinction
futuristic is subjective. (it does have an interesting double rotor or coaxial rotor system which is neat but I don't that can be clearly and succinctly explained here so best leave it out.)
01:4801:48, 24 December 2020diffhist−14
Chapter 13: The Jedi
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User:Asr1014. Describing
Wing T. Chao as "Disney Legend" is unhelpful and confusing to readers who don't already known what that is supposed to mean. (From reading his article it seems he is an architect by profession and worked for many years as a top executive in Disney and retired more a decade ago). Would need a separate sentence to properly explain his background.
03:2203:22, 24 December 2020diffhist+23
Grogu
Top lists do not belong in the same paragraph as "Not all reviews were positive" (I'd put it with Awards if there was section.)
02:1002:10, 24 December 2020diffhist−11
Transformers: Age of Extinction
futuristic is subjective. (it does have an interesting double rotor or coaxial rotor system which is neat but I don't that can be clearly and succinctly explained here so best leave it out.)
01:4801:48, 24 December 2020diffhist−14
Chapter 13: The Jedi
Revert change by
User:Asr1014. Describing
Wing T. Chao as "Disney Legend" is unhelpful and confusing to readers who don't already known what that is supposed to mean. (From reading his article it seems he is an architect by profession and worked for many years as a top executive in Disney and retired more a decade ago). Would need a separate sentence to properly explain his background.