00:4600:46, 8 October 2018diffhist+396
Good Morning, Vietnam
Runtime 120 and 52 seconds rounds to 121. Copyedit. Better to avoid claiming "notably" and instead present the words from critic. Rotten Tomatoes score doesn't mean much if you don't know how many critics were counted.
00:2800:28, 8 October 2018diffhist+50
Lady Bird (film)
Runtime. Add BBFC reference instead of expecting other editors to guess which of the many references in the Release section actually includes the runtime and if they are actually accurate.
00:2000:20, 8 October 2018diffhist+47
Lady Bird (film)
→Reception: Copyedit. rephrase "directorial efforts" it's more than an effort it is an achievement (but simple neutral wording will do). Awards, let the achievement sink in before undercutting at the end of the paragraph with the lack of any Oscar win.
23:0423:04, 7 October 2018diffhist+9
Spawn (1997 film)
→Soundtrack: Amazon.com links to verify albums exist and tracklist. This is better than a 3 year old citation needed request. If it is not enough then add more better sources too.
17:0017:00, 7 October 2018diffhist−23
Norbit
Don't say "some" unless you are presenting multiple sources. This was added way way back by
User:Daveman16. The LA Times article and does name a notable author but not sure it is worth expanding further.
16:1616:16, 7 October 2018diffhist−35
Norbit
To call her evil is too simplistic, the harsh reality is she is an abusive wife. Cast section should have short character, remove excessive plot detail.
15:5615:56, 7 October 2018diffhist−6
Draft:King Spawn
"currently"? The sources say he is set to star, no need to add extra doubt to the sentence. see aslo
WP:RELTIME the phrase currently should be avoid, say when. I think it reasonably follows from the lack of distributor that there is no release date, so put sentences together.
00:4600:46, 8 October 2018diffhist+396
Good Morning, Vietnam
Runtime 120 and 52 seconds rounds to 121. Copyedit. Better to avoid claiming "notably" and instead present the words from critic. Rotten Tomatoes score doesn't mean much if you don't know how many critics were counted.
00:2800:28, 8 October 2018diffhist+50
Lady Bird (film)
Runtime. Add BBFC reference instead of expecting other editors to guess which of the many references in the Release section actually includes the runtime and if they are actually accurate.
00:2000:20, 8 October 2018diffhist+47
Lady Bird (film)
→Reception: Copyedit. rephrase "directorial efforts" it's more than an effort it is an achievement (but simple neutral wording will do). Awards, let the achievement sink in before undercutting at the end of the paragraph with the lack of any Oscar win.
23:0423:04, 7 October 2018diffhist+9
Spawn (1997 film)
→Soundtrack: Amazon.com links to verify albums exist and tracklist. This is better than a 3 year old citation needed request. If it is not enough then add more better sources too.
17:0017:00, 7 October 2018diffhist−23
Norbit
Don't say "some" unless you are presenting multiple sources. This was added way way back by
User:Daveman16. The LA Times article and does name a notable author but not sure it is worth expanding further.
16:1616:16, 7 October 2018diffhist−35
Norbit
To call her evil is too simplistic, the harsh reality is she is an abusive wife. Cast section should have short character, remove excessive plot detail.
15:5615:56, 7 October 2018diffhist−6
Draft:King Spawn
"currently"? The sources say he is set to star, no need to add extra doubt to the sentence. see aslo
WP:RELTIME the phrase currently should be avoid, say when. I think it reasonably follows from the lack of distributor that there is no release date, so put sentences together.