18:5318:53, 14 January 2024diffhist−155
TMNT (film)
Unsourced (
WP:V) but also not clear why this is even worth mentioning. (was added without any explanation by https151.52.252.73)
16:5916:59, 14 January 2024diffhist−17
Flipper (franchise)
TBD means To Be Determined. Highly unlikely that any of these old shows will get signficantly more reviews. N/A meaning Not Applicable/Not Available is the appropriate tag.
16:1816:18, 14 January 2024diffhist−72
American Fiction (film)
WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize not supplant the article body. Exec producers could possibly be mentioned in the production section but there is no need to give them undue emphasis in the lead section.
16:0516:05, 14 January 2024diffhist+2
Plane (film)
Use same box office gross figure consistently in all three places. $74.5 million normally rounds up to $75 million, inaccurate and misleading to truncate it to $74 million.
10:2810:28, 14 January 2024diffhist−23
The Diamond Age
Copyedit. Simply describe the storylines rather than trying to enumerate them or subjectively evaluate their relative weights.
09:5609:56, 14 January 2024diffhist+72
Snow Crash
→See also: It would be far better not to have a See also section but instead mention important things as part of the main article. The influence and importance of
Neuromancer seems obvious, and high relevance. The relevance of the other links is unclear.
09:4309:43, 14 January 2024diffhist+250
Snow Crash
Anchors for previously deleted sections. Very brief references to the technologies to help encyclopedia readers (but only briefly to explain, less than a sentence, not paragraphs long to verbosely to indulge fans of the book as before).
09:2409:24, 14 January 2024diffhist−2
Snow Crash
WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize. Inappropriate to explain background development information at length in the intro section. Move content down into article body.
09:1809:18, 14 January 2024diffhist−136
Snow Crash
Remove more outdated banner tags. If there are still remaining issues then use specific citation needed tags instead of banner.
09:1609:16, 14 January 2024diffhist−225
Snow Crash
appears to? Dont equivocate, it's clearly evident from the book and the prior short story. Remove unhelpful banner tags, use sentence specific citation needed tags if you really challenge any of the remaining text.
18:5318:53, 14 January 2024diffhist−155
TMNT (film)
Unsourced (
WP:V) but also not clear why this is even worth mentioning. (was added without any explanation by https151.52.252.73)
16:5916:59, 14 January 2024diffhist−17
Flipper (franchise)
TBD means To Be Determined. Highly unlikely that any of these old shows will get signficantly more reviews. N/A meaning Not Applicable/Not Available is the appropriate tag.
16:1816:18, 14 January 2024diffhist−72
American Fiction (film)
WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize not supplant the article body. Exec producers could possibly be mentioned in the production section but there is no need to give them undue emphasis in the lead section.
16:0516:05, 14 January 2024diffhist+2
Plane (film)
Use same box office gross figure consistently in all three places. $74.5 million normally rounds up to $75 million, inaccurate and misleading to truncate it to $74 million.
10:2810:28, 14 January 2024diffhist−23
The Diamond Age
Copyedit. Simply describe the storylines rather than trying to enumerate them or subjectively evaluate their relative weights.
09:5609:56, 14 January 2024diffhist+72
Snow Crash
→See also: It would be far better not to have a See also section but instead mention important things as part of the main article. The influence and importance of
Neuromancer seems obvious, and high relevance. The relevance of the other links is unclear.
09:4309:43, 14 January 2024diffhist+250
Snow Crash
Anchors for previously deleted sections. Very brief references to the technologies to help encyclopedia readers (but only briefly to explain, less than a sentence, not paragraphs long to verbosely to indulge fans of the book as before).
09:2409:24, 14 January 2024diffhist−2
Snow Crash
WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize. Inappropriate to explain background development information at length in the intro section. Move content down into article body.
09:1809:18, 14 January 2024diffhist−136
Snow Crash
Remove more outdated banner tags. If there are still remaining issues then use specific citation needed tags instead of banner.
09:1609:16, 14 January 2024diffhist−225
Snow Crash
appears to? Dont equivocate, it's clearly evident from the book and the prior short story. Remove unhelpful banner tags, use sentence specific citation needed tags if you really challenge any of the remaining text.