21:5921:59, 22 August 2022diffhist−11
Uncut Gems
This is supposed to be an encyclopedia. Copyedit for brevity. The message is important not the medium. Leave out where he wrote it, the reference is the better place for that detail.
21:4121:41, 22 August 2022diffhist+11
Day Shift (film)
Verify quote. I see the fragments in the main article "Foxx is cool to the max" and "You leave "Day Shift" feeling pummeled, beaten down by an avalanche of sound and fury signifying the usual nothing." but the exact quote only exists on the Metacritic/Rotten Tomatoes summary (but Travers or ABC News would have written it anyway.)
21:1021:10, 22 August 2022diffhist+83
A Normal Amount of Rage
→Plot: Add a little character detail. She takes her time and is careful and deliberate about it. Then she continues to present her closing arguments. (Defeating Titania is not as important as her getting on with being a lawyer.)
19:1919:19, 22 August 2022diffhist+431
Mack & Rita
Having more than one reference is not a bad thing. I would like to have context inline but I have not added it yet. D+ is "alarmingly" and readers should not be left with the possibility of thinking it is a passing grade. Undid revision 1105985434 by
Indagate (
talk)Tag: Undo
16:0516:05, 22 August 2022diffhist−12
Transformers (film series)
mixed to positive? Please don't equivocate like that. See past discussions: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Film/Archive_48#Mixed_to_positive_/_Mixed_to_negativeTag: Undo
21:5921:59, 22 August 2022diffhist−11
Uncut Gems
This is supposed to be an encyclopedia. Copyedit for brevity. The message is important not the medium. Leave out where he wrote it, the reference is the better place for that detail.
21:4121:41, 22 August 2022diffhist+11
Day Shift (film)
Verify quote. I see the fragments in the main article "Foxx is cool to the max" and "You leave "Day Shift" feeling pummeled, beaten down by an avalanche of sound and fury signifying the usual nothing." but the exact quote only exists on the Metacritic/Rotten Tomatoes summary (but Travers or ABC News would have written it anyway.)
21:1021:10, 22 August 2022diffhist+83
A Normal Amount of Rage
→Plot: Add a little character detail. She takes her time and is careful and deliberate about it. Then she continues to present her closing arguments. (Defeating Titania is not as important as her getting on with being a lawyer.)
19:1919:19, 22 August 2022diffhist+431
Mack & Rita
Having more than one reference is not a bad thing. I would like to have context inline but I have not added it yet. D+ is "alarmingly" and readers should not be left with the possibility of thinking it is a passing grade. Undid revision 1105985434 by
Indagate (
talk)Tag: Undo
16:0516:05, 22 August 2022diffhist−12
Transformers (film series)
mixed to positive? Please don't equivocate like that. See past discussions: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Film/Archive_48#Mixed_to_positive_/_Mixed_to_negativeTag: Undo