23:4023:40, 21 September 2021diffhist+2
Yasmine Al-Bustami
Copyedit. You cannot say "Despite her diverse background" before you've explained her background. Reorder paragraph to put her background before "Despite". (Would be even better to rewrite the paragraph entirely.)
23:4023:40, 21 September 2021diffhist+2
Yasmine Al-Bustami
Copyedit. You cannot say "Despite her diverse background" before you've explained her background. Reorder paragraph to put her background before "Despite". (Would be even better to rewrite the paragraph entirely.)