2 March 2013

• 08:32 08:32, 2 March 2013 diff hist 0‎ Lights Out (game) ‎ →‎Light chasing: minor - comma added

1 March 2013

• 17:44 17:44, 1 March 2013 diff hist −7‎ Kermit the Frog ‎ →‎Sesame Street: subjective (both "most" and "memorable")

28 February 2013

• 20:21 20:21, 28 February 2013 diff hist +1,670‎ Talk:History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎RAMAC Disk Diameter: Okey Dokey.
• 19:40 19:40, 28 February 2013 diff hist +17‎ IEEE 802.11n-2009 ‎ broke up somewhat confusing run-on

27 February 2013

• 08:34 08:34, 27 February 2013 diff hist −59‎ Twinaxial cabling ‎ →‎IBM: "Go" is ambiguous. It depends on the performance requirement. Article is about the medium, not the signal (and/or performance) that goes over it.
• 08:30 08:30, 27 February 2013 diff hist 0‎ Twinaxial cabling ‎ I forgot what year it was. (Whoops.)
• 08:29 08:29, 27 February 2013 diff hist −18‎ Twinaxial cabling ‎ Gave year and removed "when?" tag.

26 February 2013

• 20:57 20:57, 26 February 2013 diff hist −123‎ Todd-AO ‎ →‎Todd-AO process: Digression suitable for a magazine article, but not for an encyclopedia article.
• 20:50 20:50, 26 February 2013 diff hist −10‎ Todd-AO ‎ →‎History: unencyclopedic wording (tone), subjective

24 February 2013

• 21:05 21:05, 24 February 2013 diff hist −3‎ History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎IBM 350: Fixed my previous error: clarified that it referred to a building's doorway not the cabinet doorway (as in for a stack of platters themselves to fit through), which is how I initially read it.
• 20:50 20:50, 24 February 2013 diff hist 0‎ History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎IBM 350: Looks like a mistake ("deep"), fixed it as "wide". I'm going by what's consistent with the other data and my experience with the sizes/shapes of computer cabinets. Needs citation though. Looking for one....
• 20:31 20:31, 24 February 2013 diff hist +399‎ History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎IBM 350: Addressed citation problem (for the time being). Addressed "strict" subjectiveness problem. Clarified referring to width. This might do the trick. What do you think Tom94022?
• 20:15 20:15, 24 February 2013 diff hist −130‎ History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎IBM 350: Remaining also-uncited text, now a mere factoid, is now out of place. But, I'm not sure constraint was really TMI. If cited, it would be quite relevant & inclusion-worthy IMHO. Consider reinstating whole para, but with a citation tag?
• 20:04 20:04, 24 February 2013 diff hist +27‎ Transducer ‎ The primacy of "signal" in the idea should be mentioned in the first-sentence-summary I think. Agree? The technically correct, but rather less important, non-necessity of "signalness" is covered adequately in the 3rd sentence. Right?

23 February 2013

• 19:40 19:40, 23 February 2013 diff hist −8‎ History of IBM magnetic disk drives ‎ →‎IBM 350: WP doesn't "presume". Reworded so it doesn't say if that was the reason, rather only that constraint existed. Constraint could have been flexible, or the size didn't need to push the limit, or whatever - all nicely (or weasely) unsaid.

21 February 2013

• 23:17 23:17, 21 February 2013 diff hist +235‎ Talk:Fordlândia ‎ →‎Name: agree