21 May 2010

• 03:59 03:59, 21 May 2010 diff hist −17‎ Lunar space elevator ‎ →‎Fabrication: Newtons "convert" to mass only in the context of a 1g environment, which isn't the case here. They do convert to pounds though, which is also a unit of force.
• 03:39 03:39, 21 May 2010 diff hist −26‎ Lunar space elevator ‎ →‎Fabrication: Non-need for equatorial anchor applies to Earth too, gravity has little to do with it. Eq. anchors on Earth are lower-risk and simpler, but nothing makes off-eq. anchors impossible.
• 02:23 02:23, 21 May 2010 diff hist −1‎ Jim Breuer ‎ →‎Television career: "ill-fated" -> "short-lived" (more better :-) ), fixed up accidental italics
• 01:40 01:40, 21 May 2010 diff hist 0‎ Talk:John Birch Society ‎ →‎"Far-Right": minor typo
• 01:38 01:38, 21 May 2010 diff hist +760‎ Talk:John Birch Society ‎ →‎"Far-Right": The more dry and boring, the better....... :-) . Tag: repeating characters
• 01:24 01:24, 21 May 2010 diff hist −4‎ John Birch Society ‎ "Radical" has non-neutral name-calling taint. Ref2 doesn't say it (they say "far"). WP redirects "radical rw" to "far rw", which is what they call it. "Far" is straightforward & descriptive. Neutral.
• 01:13 01:13, 21 May 2010 diff hist −48‎ John Birch Society ‎ →‎Position on American political spectrum: Removed sect. title. Summing up para. in that way seemed "off". Straightforward stating of the content seemed more neutral.
• 01:06 01:06, 21 May 2010 diff hist −53‎ John Birch Society ‎ →‎Position on American political spectrum: Toned down the implication here that they were a hate group. The parenthetical comment is unnecessary anyway as the link can provide side-information.

20 May 2010

• 19:27 19:27, 20 May 2010 diff hist −19‎ LET L-23 Super Blaník ‎ made a little better encyclopedic tone
• 19:11 19:11, 20 May 2010 diff hist +1,134‎ Talk:T-tail ‎ →‎Difficulty of spin recovery?: I think its a few things muddled together that makes the apparent inconsistency.

19 May 2010

• 16:38 16:38, 19 May 2010 diff hist −9‎ Caps Lock ‎ →‎Shift lock: A little more encyclopedia grammar
• 16:37 16:37, 19 May 2010 diff hist −42‎ Caps Lock ‎ →‎Cultural significance: No need to plug one company's product in particular when talking about an attribute that many have. (Non-neutral)
• 04:15 04:15, 19 May 2010 diff hist −70‎ Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat ‎ Somebody slipped a mention of their high school. If it was named best, it's off-topic anyway. Deleted.
• 04:12 04:12, 19 May 2010 diff hist −82‎ Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat ‎ more fixups, less unencyclopedic style
• 03:59 03:59, 19 May 2010 diff hist 0‎ Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat ‎ same
• 03:58 03:58, 19 May 2010 diff hist +1‎ Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat ‎ fixed grammar
• 03:29 03:29, 19 May 2010 diff hist +3‎ Hooters ‎ →‎Hooters Girls: It's not a "euphemism" which is a nicer way of referring to something. In fact, "hooters" is a less-nice way of referencing! :-) "Slang" is more accurate.

18 May 2010

• 03:57 03:57, 18 May 2010 diff hist −149‎ Radio Inside ‎ →‎Plot Summary: This is a wild extrapolation of one off-hand remark in the film. Non-neutral POV, Original Research, Opinion, Proselytizing.
• 02:23 02:23, 18 May 2010 diff hist +6‎ Radio Inside ‎ →‎Plot Summary: Pronouns were confusing close to indeterminate. Also, usage of "we" and "us" and "him" implied a non-neutral, proselytizing POV.
• 02:19 02:19, 18 May 2010 diff hist +135‎ User talk:108.7.8.102 ‎ Nope

17 May 2010

• 04:51 04:51, 17 May 2010 diff hist −40‎ Rubbing alcohol ‎ Flammability IN water is not credible, and the cited reference didn't actually say it. Some things burn in water, but not isopropanol. If I'm mistaken, find a a citation please for it.