25 November 2015

• 00:35 00:35, 25 November 2015 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎Recent disruptive edits: indent

24 November 2015

• 00:10 00:10, 24 November 2015 diff hist +430‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎It's hard to avoid calling it POV-pushing.

23 November 2015

• 23:56 23:56, 23 November 2015 diff hist +8‎ Beak trimming ‎ Tagged article "POV". Needs work reducing undue weight of "pain" material and some remarks with POV tone.
• 23:51 23:51, 23 November 2015 diff hist +452‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎Recent disruptive edits: Includability requires more than "Somebody said it and I like it".
• 23:38 23:38, 23 November 2015 diff hist +1,415‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎It's hard to avoid calling it POV-pushing.: new section
• 22:37 22:37, 23 November 2015 diff hist −58‎ Beak trimming ‎ Nutty overstatement is inconsistent with rest of (still undue weight) content about pain. Ambiguous too as many forms of trimming are obviously not painful and clearly done for health and loving care of pets. You need stop the POV-pushing. See talk page.
• 06:18 06:18, 23 November 2015 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎Undue weight on "pain" POV disguised as "costs".: A better "Transition,".
• 03:33 03:33, 23 November 2015 diff hist +153‎ Beak trimming ‎ Added (cited!) comment about humane-ness of heated blade. Saying "w/o anesthesia" implies it's otherwise necessary which isn't well established at all. Lots of videos show beak trimming without it in a way appearing quite humane and necessary for health.
• 03:06 03:06, 23 November 2015 diff hist +1,022‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎Undue weight on "pain" POV disguised as "costs".: The real problem is the column-inches and over-detail of "pain text".
• 02:30 02:30, 23 November 2015 diff hist −24‎ Beak trimming ‎ Removed needless POV snipe. Again, overbearing discussion of "pain" is WP:undue and POV, misrepresents the subject of the article. Additionally, WP:burden says *you* need give cite before reinstating after removal for lack of ref.

22 November 2015

• 23:36 23:36, 22 November 2015 diff hist +751‎ Talk:Beak trimming ‎ →‎Undue weight on "pain" POV disguised as "costs".: new section
• 23:04 23:04, 22 November 2015 diff hist +27‎ Beak trimming ‎ Added "heated blade" back in. It's mentioned in the photo's description (although still not cited there). It's really the "w/o anesthesia" part that contains most of the POV, undue weight, digression, etc.
• 22:54 22:54, 22 November 2015 diff hist +9‎ Beak trimming ‎ →‎Chronic pain: Made it sound less like speculation while retaining what I think is intended meaning (i.e. the elaboration later in para.). Although, all the column-inches going on and on about pain is undue weight on an obvious POV.
• 22:23 22:23, 22 November 2015 diff hist −39‎ Beak trimming ‎ As well as the photo's page giving no indication nor citation that it was "heated and w/o anasthesia", it's POV and WP:undue to overfocus on such a digression when simple straightforward wording works just as well and is more encyclopedic.
• 18:39 18:39, 22 November 2015 diff hist −87‎ Beak trimming ‎ →‎Chronic pain: Removed uncited speculation.
• 18:34 18:34, 22 November 2015 diff hist −36‎ Beak trimming ‎ Removed uncited, non-evident assertion.
• 09:00 09:00, 22 November 2015 diff hist −114‎ Perforated ulcer ‎ →‎Notable victims: Removed uncited, possibly sensitive, medical info about a living person (see WP:BLP). The page on this person doesn't even have "ulcer" in it.
• 08:49 08:49, 22 November 2015 diff hist −92‎ Perforated ulcer ‎ →‎Notable victims: off topic digression

21 November 2015

• 18:59 18:59, 21 November 2015 diff hist −56‎ Jethro Tull (agriculturist) ‎ Removed unnecessary, somewhat over-the-top, confusing statement. (One can't revolutionize the future of something, and something's success isn't ordinarily said to be revolutionized.)
• 00:43 00:43, 21 November 2015 diff hist 0‎ Harold Gore ‎ fixed misplaced comma
• 00:42 00:42, 21 November 2015 diff hist −4‎ Mark Oliver Everett ‎ added quote marks, removed odd bolding

19 November 2015

• 02:35 02:35, 19 November 2015 diff hist −13‎ Wide Area Augmentation System ‎ →‎History and development: removed subjective "Unfortunately,"

17 November 2015

• 05:25 05:25, 17 November 2015 diff hist −18‎ Fargo (TV series) ‎ →‎Season 2 (2015): The very latest he could have returned is 1975 making his return not really that recent.

16 November 2015

• 00:55 00:55, 16 November 2015 diff hist −1‎ Tom and Ray Magliozzi ‎ →‎Career: Removed, excessive, commas, split up sentence.

9 November 2015

• 17:41 17:41, 9 November 2015 diff hist −1,269‎ Orr (Catch-22) ‎ →‎Explanation of the character's name: Removed made-up material tagged as original research since 2008.
• 17:38 17:38, 9 November 2015 diff hist −42‎ Orr (Catch-22) ‎ →‎Prior story: removed "presumption"
• 17:28 17:28, 9 November 2015 diff hist −17‎ Principal photography ‎ Previous tone placed the reason for "failure" on the actor. It's more encyclopedic to stick to a straightforward statement unencumbered with innuendo about who's fault an undesired result would be.
• 17:21 17:21, 9 November 2015 diff hist −4‎ Principal photography ‎ Undid revision 689758211 by Beyond My Ken ( talk) Revert was unexplained. Was there a reason? Was it accidental?
• 17:13 17:13, 9 November 2015 diff hist −85‎ Orr (Catch-22) ‎ →‎Major themes: Removed original research. There are no references which state these are "themes". "Themes" of any work are inherently subjective and at the same time a tempting OR hazard. They may be included however, if a good ref says it is theme. Tag: section blanking
• 05:25 05:25, 9 November 2015 diff hist −4‎ Principal photography ‎ simple words = good, fancy words = not as good

8 November 2015

• 19:39 19:39, 8 November 2015 diff hist −229‎ Anthony Perkins ‎ →‎Personal life: uncited assertion about other living persons
• 19:28 19:28, 8 November 2015 diff hist −17‎ B-25 Mitchell aircraft in Catch-22 ‎ →‎Aircraft: another subjective expectation. (Today, 17 would be a lot!) Also removed the fluffy "to this day".
• 19:25 19:25, 8 November 2015 diff hist −16‎ B-25 Mitchell aircraft in Catch-22 ‎ Removed subjective implications about what was expected to be possible. A straightforward "He did X and he did Y" is more encyclopedic.
• 19:19 19:19, 8 November 2015 diff hist −11‎ B-25 Mitchell aircraft in Catch-22 ‎ straightforward, fewer words. There's a name for this (previous) form, but I don't know what it is ("passive voice" or something like that?)
• 19:12 19:12, 8 November 2015 diff hist −12‎ Catch-22 (film) ‎ →‎Aircraft: removed some minor extraneous fluff (unencyclopedic).

7 November 2015

• 05:50 05:50, 7 November 2015 diff hist +210‎ Assault ‎ →‎Consent: Made the reason into hover text. I had to look up how to do it, it's pretty neat! :-) .
• 05:45 05:45, 7 November 2015 diff hist +260‎ Assault ‎ →‎Consent: These cases aren't specified in enough detail to be clear what they refer to. The cases might be well known to practitioners, but not necessarily by lay readers. Can anyone help with more specifics?

6 November 2015

• 07:08 07:08, 6 November 2015 diff hist −266‎ Vacated judgment ‎ →‎USA: Ref says this for the case at hand, but it doesn't say it in general. Statement is also dubious as no precedent is binding anyway (I think).
• 07:00 07:00, 6 November 2015 diff hist −311‎ Rectify ‎ Ref doesn't say this. "almost all" is overstated (unencyclopedic) and subjective.

5 November 2015

• 17:09 17:09, 5 November 2015 diff hist −16‎ TRS-80 ‎ Removed unnecessary "age" distraction. The "age" of any date is almost always immaterial. It's kind of silly to include it unless it's needed for a good (and clear) reason. It's generally included for people, but not anywhere else.
• 17:01 17:01, 5 November 2015 diff hist +19‎ Zilog ‎ Notability is implied by inclusion (removed "notably"), added the TRS-80.

2 November 2015

• 08:04 08:04, 2 November 2015 diff hist +1‎ Fargo season 2 ‎ punctuation
• 08:04 08:04, 2 November 2015 diff hist −15‎ Fargo season 2 ‎ removed unencyclopedic subjective "color"