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→Education: More encyclopedic and factual to say it this way, subjective whether or not they achieve it. Again, it could otherwise stay, but it contributes to overall promotional tone.
17:5617:56, 18 September 2011diffhist−591
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→History: This future plan is interesting and (marginally?) notable, but not History. If someone wants to replace it, please find or create a place for it in the article.
17:4917:49, 18 September 2011diffhist−26
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Merged Early History and Recent History. Separation contributes to the sense of "gushing" about the founder by keeping him, well, separate. It also flows better when merged.
17:4417:44, 18 September 2011diffhist−496
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→Early history: "banishment" also subjective + POV. Trimmed down off-topic (and POV) detail on founder which is well covered in the linked article on him. Removed off-topic photo also covered in other article.
18:0218:02, 18 September 2011diffhist+9
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→Education: More encyclopedic and factual to say it this way, subjective whether or not they achieve it. Again, it could otherwise stay, but it contributes to overall promotional tone.
17:5617:56, 18 September 2011diffhist−591
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→History: This future plan is interesting and (marginally?) notable, but not History. If someone wants to replace it, please find or create a place for it in the article.
17:4917:49, 18 September 2011diffhist−26
Exploratorium
Merged Early History and Recent History. Separation contributes to the sense of "gushing" about the founder by keeping him, well, separate. It also flows better when merged.
17:4417:44, 18 September 2011diffhist−496
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→Early history: "banishment" also subjective + POV. Trimmed down off-topic (and POV) detail on founder which is well covered in the linked article on him. Removed off-topic photo also covered in other article.