23:3423:34, 6 May 2018diffhist−588
Al Giordano
Revised lead, which previously gave undue weight to (potential) activity that has little to do with the Giordano's notability.Tag: references removed
16:4916:49, 5 May 2018diffhist−390
Al Giordano
Deleted misleading passage. Source says that Giordano was "first to grasp the portent of ... the Obama paradigm shift," referring to the power of Obama's small-donor fundraising model in the Democratic presidential primary. Walcott does not say that Giordano was the first to predict that Obama's presidential campaign would be successful.
23:3423:34, 6 May 2018diffhist−588
Al Giordano
Revised lead, which previously gave undue weight to (potential) activity that has little to do with the Giordano's notability.Tag: references removed
16:4916:49, 5 May 2018diffhist−390
Al Giordano
Deleted misleading passage. Source says that Giordano was "first to grasp the portent of ... the Obama paradigm shift," referring to the power of Obama's small-donor fundraising model in the Democratic presidential primary. Walcott does not say that Giordano was the first to predict that Obama's presidential campaign would be successful.