14:4014:40, 20 September 2018diffhist+17
Léo Major
MOS: non-English typographical elements (like guillemets) should be replaced with their English equivalents. But in any case, no quotation marks are necessary; the title of the film simply needs to be italicized
11:4611:46, 20 September 2018diffhist−45
Old Kingdom of Egypt
rewording; formatting; removing undefined parameters from infobox; capitalizing all instances of "dynasty" that are paired with ordinal numbers as they refer to specific, unique periods/concepts (and also writing out the ordinals instead of using numbers with ordinal indicators, as the written form appears to be standard)
11:2011:20, 20 September 2018diffhist−12
Pschent
I'm not sure why we're opening by referring to it as "the name" of the thing it was instead of as the thing it was
07:4507:45, 20 September 2018diffhist+1
Republic
"plebes" -> "plebs" (original Latin and standard spelling in English; it's also the actual name of Wikipedia's article)
11:2711:27, 19 September 2018diffhist+6
Explosive
→Low explosives: explicitly link to smokeless powder as "gunpowder" specifically refers to "black powder"; Wikipedia's article on "gunpowder" follows this convention and covers "black" powder almost exclusively
15:5615:56, 17 September 2018diffhist+18
Palestine Papers
"leaked by" Al Jazeera to "leaked to" (and published by) Al Jazeera—"leaking" is done by people who have access to sensitive material, not by the media organization which publishes it
14:4014:40, 20 September 2018diffhist+17
Léo Major
MOS: non-English typographical elements (like guillemets) should be replaced with their English equivalents. But in any case, no quotation marks are necessary; the title of the film simply needs to be italicized
11:4611:46, 20 September 2018diffhist−45
Old Kingdom of Egypt
rewording; formatting; removing undefined parameters from infobox; capitalizing all instances of "dynasty" that are paired with ordinal numbers as they refer to specific, unique periods/concepts (and also writing out the ordinals instead of using numbers with ordinal indicators, as the written form appears to be standard)
11:2011:20, 20 September 2018diffhist−12
Pschent
I'm not sure why we're opening by referring to it as "the name" of the thing it was instead of as the thing it was
07:4507:45, 20 September 2018diffhist+1
Republic
"plebes" -> "plebs" (original Latin and standard spelling in English; it's also the actual name of Wikipedia's article)
11:2711:27, 19 September 2018diffhist+6
Explosive
→Low explosives: explicitly link to smokeless powder as "gunpowder" specifically refers to "black powder"; Wikipedia's article on "gunpowder" follows this convention and covers "black" powder almost exclusively
15:5615:56, 17 September 2018diffhist+18
Palestine Papers
"leaked by" Al Jazeera to "leaked to" (and published by) Al Jazeera—"leaking" is done by people who have access to sensitive material, not by the media organization which publishes it