02:4602:46, 19 August 2022diffhist+5
Blizzard of Ozz
Since this is Ozzy's debut solo album but not his debut album as a band member we should make that clear that in the lead sentence.
16:5616:56, 8 September 2021diffhist−1
Grendel's Den
Given that the restaurant still operates as Sept., 2021 and there is no reliable source stating that Affleck no longer considers it one of his favorites, it better to say it "is" a favorite of rather then "was" a favorite.
18:4618:46, 19 February 2020diffhist−11
False-uniqueness effect
Removing dictionary def tag as while the article could use more fleshing out, it's currently more like a stub rather the a dictionary definition since it currently has too much content to fit as a simple dictionary def IMO.
08:3208:32, 19 December 2019diffhist+36
Free market
since the term "free enterprise" redirects here we should mention that it is a synonym for "free market" in the opening sentence.
11 December 2019
03:4403:44, 11 December 2019diffhist−191
Music Choice
→Music Choice v. Stingray: Removing unsourced debatable opinion sentence "The Music Modernization Act ensures artists receive..." as such opinions in the WP voice have no business being in articles (They should be included only if attributable to some notable person/source.)
05:3105:31, 10 July 2019diffhist+36
Foto Hut
clarifying that the chain now defunct and rewording part about its closure to remove implications it failed from the get-go.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
20:0920:09, 3 May 2019diffhist+162
No homo
→Criticism of the phrase: restoring sentence on criticism of the term since the sentence "Others have pointed out..." clearly refers to previous sentence that was missing (see talk if you have an issue with this).
30 April 2019
19:3519:35, 30 April 2019diffhist+9
Opus Dei
→Controversy: Not everyone these days knows the Fracoist government was fascists, if they even know about the Franco government, so that needs to be made clear.
19:2519:25, 30 April 2019diffhist+317
Opus Dei
NPOV requires that the controversial nature of Opus Dei be at least briefly mentioned on the lead (see talk).
09:1509:15, 8 December 2018diffhist0
IPhone 3G
“Important” is subjective, “prominant” is not, as features like multitasking where prominently touted but whether they are “important” on a smart phone is subjective.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
08:1408:14, 19 November 2018diffhist−166
Our House (American TV series)
Removing unsourced statements about the Warner Bros. not releasing an episode guide and it's possible DVD being unknown, especially given that the first statement is very negative towards WB.
02:4602:46, 19 August 2022diffhist+5
Blizzard of Ozz
Since this is Ozzy's debut solo album but not his debut album as a band member we should make that clear that in the lead sentence.
16:5616:56, 8 September 2021diffhist−1
Grendel's Den
Given that the restaurant still operates as Sept., 2021 and there is no reliable source stating that Affleck no longer considers it one of his favorites, it better to say it "is" a favorite of rather then "was" a favorite.
18:4618:46, 19 February 2020diffhist−11
False-uniqueness effect
Removing dictionary def tag as while the article could use more fleshing out, it's currently more like a stub rather the a dictionary definition since it currently has too much content to fit as a simple dictionary def IMO.
08:3208:32, 19 December 2019diffhist+36
Free market
since the term "free enterprise" redirects here we should mention that it is a synonym for "free market" in the opening sentence.
11 December 2019
03:4403:44, 11 December 2019diffhist−191
Music Choice
→Music Choice v. Stingray: Removing unsourced debatable opinion sentence "The Music Modernization Act ensures artists receive..." as such opinions in the WP voice have no business being in articles (They should be included only if attributable to some notable person/source.)
05:3105:31, 10 July 2019diffhist+36
Foto Hut
clarifying that the chain now defunct and rewording part about its closure to remove implications it failed from the get-go.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
20:0920:09, 3 May 2019diffhist+162
No homo
→Criticism of the phrase: restoring sentence on criticism of the term since the sentence "Others have pointed out..." clearly refers to previous sentence that was missing (see talk if you have an issue with this).
30 April 2019
19:3519:35, 30 April 2019diffhist+9
Opus Dei
→Controversy: Not everyone these days knows the Fracoist government was fascists, if they even know about the Franco government, so that needs to be made clear.
19:2519:25, 30 April 2019diffhist+317
Opus Dei
NPOV requires that the controversial nature of Opus Dei be at least briefly mentioned on the lead (see talk).
09:1509:15, 8 December 2018diffhist0
IPhone 3G
“Important” is subjective, “prominant” is not, as features like multitasking where prominently touted but whether they are “important” on a smart phone is subjective.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
08:1408:14, 19 November 2018diffhist−166
Our House (American TV series)
Removing unsourced statements about the Warner Bros. not releasing an episode guide and it's possible DVD being unknown, especially given that the first statement is very negative towards WB.