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19 October 2015
- 01:36 01:36, 19 October 2015 diff hist −10 Studebaker subjective
17 October 2015
- 18:26 18:26, 17 October 2015 diff hist −2 Miserere (Allegri) →Recordings: If it is indeed said to be celebrated in the ref, then "celebrated" needs no "so-called" quotes. Just say (paraphrase) what the ref says. Does the ref really say it's "celebrated" though?
- 18:22 18:22, 17 October 2015 diff hist −2 Miserere (Allegri) →Description and use: removed unencyclopedic "so-called" quotes
15 October 2015
- 18:05 18:05, 15 October 2015 diff hist +19 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-4 →References: fixed broken link
- 17:59 17:59, 15 October 2015 diff hist +1 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-4 →Accident history: "departed" was somewhat ambiguous because it has another meaning in the context of a spin (as in "departed from controlled flight")
- 17:55 17:55, 15 October 2015 diff hist −8 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-3 →Design and development: "in fact" presumes a subjective expectation. Just say it straightforwardly.
10 October 2015
- 17:42 17:42, 10 October 2015 diff hist +28 Carol Burnett Undid revision 685080216 by 108.20.176.55 ( talk) I introduced other problems that I didn't want to fix, so I just reverted.
- 17:40 17:40, 10 October 2015 diff hist −28 Carol Burnett →Personal life: The problem here wasn't a lack of a citation, but that the reference was included as part of the text. Moved the reference to an inline citation. The formatting of the citation can use some improvement though.
7 October 2015
- 01:57 01:57, 7 October 2015 diff hist −86 Crispus Attucks Removed out-of-place remark, not a summary of material in main text. Not sourced. With a source (and maybe a little more detail about the matter), it can be put back, but it should be in the "Early life" section where it would fit better.
- 00:31 00:31, 7 October 2015 diff hist −39 Atomic demolition munition →Military uses: "Recent" is subjective/ambiguous. Also, the source of a purported fact is usually off topic for inclusion in text (as is so here). Source is given here (properly) via the inline citations. Reworded to straightforwardly state the fact.
6 October 2015
- 23:48 23:48, 6 October 2015 diff hist +2 Castle Bravo →Fallout: American spelling. Subject is more American than British, the rest of the article is also already established in American style. Also, the error was America's fault so we should take ALL the blame! Right? :-)
5 October 2015
- 09:14 09:14, 5 October 2015 diff hist +28 Dan Carlin →Background: Tagged unsourced. It's also unsourced in the Lynn Carlin article.
- 09:12 09:12, 5 October 2015 diff hist +28 Lynn Carlin →Personal life: Tagged unsourced.
- 09:07 09:07, 5 October 2015 diff hist +42 Dan Carlin →Hardcore History: Tagged section OR
- 09:07 09:07, 5 October 2015 diff hist +42 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Tagged section "OR"
- 09:00 09:00, 5 October 2015 diff hist −15 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: subjective
- 09:00 09:00, 5 October 2015 diff hist −2 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: typo
- 08:59 08:59, 5 October 2015 diff hist −120 Dan Carlin →Background: subjective "frequently", "among highest ranked"
- 08:58 08:58, 5 October 2015 diff hist −26 Dan Carlin →Background: "last dozen years" is ambiguous without a "current" time given.
- 08:56 08:56, 5 October 2015 diff hist −154 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Almost the whole article is unsourced original analysis. There are a few "factual" statements (but still unsourced!). This is OR and subjective in addition to the usual unsourced.
- 08:51 08:51, 5 October 2015 diff hist −294 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Removed unsourced original analysis.
- 08:46 08:46, 5 October 2015 diff hist −650 Dan Carlin Removed unsourced original analysis Tag: section blanking
30 September 2015
- 17:55 17:55, 30 September 2015 diff hist +121 Nuclear winter →Early work: Added tag. The data so nicely plotted up here is ''not verifiable'' because it's source is unstated.
- 17:53 17:53, 30 September 2015 diff hist +120 Effects of nuclear explosions →Other phenomena: Added tag. The data so nicely plotted up here is ''not verifiable'' because it's source is unstated.
29 September 2015
- 20:51 20:51, 29 September 2015 diff hist −11 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: What's "ironic" is subjective. Usage in this way is unencyclopedic.
- 20:49 20:49, 29 September 2015 diff hist −4 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: Split up long single-paragraph. This section needs trimming down.
- 20:46 20:46, 29 September 2015 diff hist −147 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: Makes no sense. A *large* wing generally is better at maintaining speed under load (i.e.in a turn). "Clean airframe" is good in all phases, and has no extra advantage under load.
- 20:39 20:39, 29 September 2015 diff hist −196 Radio-controlled aircraft →Sailplanes and gliders: Removed ambiguous extraneous commentary (hard to figure out the intended meaning, not that important anyway).
- 20:26 20:26, 29 September 2015 diff hist −2,105 Radio-controlled aircraft Rmvd dubious "wing location" theses. What's "easy to fly" is OR and dubious + ambiguous. Vertical CG affects dihedral effect, but not so much that it can't be compensated for by increased dihedral angle, etc. Conclusions about mid-wing were just nutty.
- 20:11 20:11, 29 September 2015 diff hist −94 Radio-controlled aircraft →High-wing planes: removed ref which was a link to a list of offerings by a vendor. If not simply promotional, it's a primary source making the conclusion original research.
- 17:09 17:09, 29 September 2015 diff hist −34 Mother Earth News Sentence smithing. Split up run-on (it was a long single-sentence paragraph). "Saner" is still problematic (POV). "Better", "meaningfull" are also still subjective.
- 03:25 03:25, 29 September 2015 diff hist −3 Plitvice Lakes National Park fixed misuse of ", but".
- 03:24 03:24, 29 September 2015 diff hist −8 Plitvice Lakes National Park presumptuous to state how clear something is to the reader
- 03:22 03:22, 29 September 2015 diff hist −21 Plitvice Lakes National Park →Influence of the vegetation: More encyclopedic style.
- 03:18 03:18, 29 September 2015 diff hist −27 Plitvice Lakes National Park →Thresholds become barriers: What's "long ago" or "not so" is subjective.
- 03:08 03:08, 29 September 2015 diff hist −26 Plitvice Lakes National Park vague, unimportant for lede
28 September 2015
- 03:09 03:09, 28 September 2015 diff hist −24 Copenhagen Suborbitals →Tycho Deep Space: simplified unnecessary description
- 01:11 01:11, 28 September 2015 diff hist −15 Vladimir Pozner Jr. →Personal life: What's "interesting" is subjective, unencyclopedic. If it's notable and well-enough ref'd, then simply say it as a fact. "Interestingly," is magazine-article style, not encyclopedic style.
- 01:02 01:02, 28 September 2015 diff hist −137 Vladimir Pozner Jr. →Personal life: Removed uncited info about living person. See wp:BLP. If anything needs good refs, a living person's religious views better damn well have damn good ones. :-) ..
- 00:53 00:53, 28 September 2015 diff hist −116 Phil Donahue →The Phil Donahue Show: Uncited, ambiguous, "is known for" is WP:weasel hiding the lack of a source *stating* he started "shock journalism".
- 00:49 00:49, 28 September 2015 diff hist +17 Phil Donahue →The Phil Donahue Show: Removed off-topic digression. Adjusted time setting of the remark to not be open ended. (left the commentary hidden (vs. deleting) so as to serve editing after 2015 when those "results are in")
23 September 2015
- 04:59 04:59, 23 September 2015 diff hist −17 Gorongosa National Park →Hydrology: Removed unencyclopedic extraneous frill ("given life").
- 04:57 04:57, 23 September 2015 diff hist −47 Gorongosa National Park →Geology: Removed subjective "most dramatic". "Yet another" presumes an expectation on the reader about what would be "enough".
- 04:53 04:53, 23 September 2015 diff hist −8 Gorongosa National Park →Geology: removed unencyclopedic frill ("nestled")
- 04:43 04:43, 23 September 2015 diff hist +2 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: fixed my mis-formatting
- 04:41 04:41, 23 September 2015 diff hist −27 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed POV tag after long contentious discussion on the talk page. (That's dry humor folks.)
- 04:39 04:39, 23 September 2015 diff hist +284 Talk:Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa
- 04:34 04:34, 23 September 2015 diff hist −1,020 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed unsourced POV blather complained about in the tag. Stuck to the basic facts rather than the "verdant land" "peaceful people" subjective POV drivel. The "2000 people" fact could use a citation.
- 04:29 04:29, 23 September 2015 diff hist −60 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed dubious POV photo. Photo doesn't appear to be clearcut anything, area is small, it looks more like a natural process. Dire unsourced POV assertions in its metadata casts additional doubt.
- 03:37 03:37, 23 September 2015 diff hist +120 File:Gorongosa clearcut.jpg →Licensing: typo and sign
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19 October 2015
- 01:36 01:36, 19 October 2015 diff hist −10 Studebaker subjective
17 October 2015
- 18:26 18:26, 17 October 2015 diff hist −2 Miserere (Allegri) →Recordings: If it is indeed said to be celebrated in the ref, then "celebrated" needs no "so-called" quotes. Just say (paraphrase) what the ref says. Does the ref really say it's "celebrated" though?
- 18:22 18:22, 17 October 2015 diff hist −2 Miserere (Allegri) →Description and use: removed unencyclopedic "so-called" quotes
15 October 2015
- 18:05 18:05, 15 October 2015 diff hist +19 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-4 →References: fixed broken link
- 17:59 17:59, 15 October 2015 diff hist +1 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-4 →Accident history: "departed" was somewhat ambiguous because it has another meaning in the context of a spin (as in "departed from controlled flight")
- 17:55 17:55, 15 October 2015 diff hist −8 Schempp-Hirth Nimbus-3 →Design and development: "in fact" presumes a subjective expectation. Just say it straightforwardly.
10 October 2015
- 17:42 17:42, 10 October 2015 diff hist +28 Carol Burnett Undid revision 685080216 by 108.20.176.55 ( talk) I introduced other problems that I didn't want to fix, so I just reverted.
- 17:40 17:40, 10 October 2015 diff hist −28 Carol Burnett →Personal life: The problem here wasn't a lack of a citation, but that the reference was included as part of the text. Moved the reference to an inline citation. The formatting of the citation can use some improvement though.
7 October 2015
- 01:57 01:57, 7 October 2015 diff hist −86 Crispus Attucks Removed out-of-place remark, not a summary of material in main text. Not sourced. With a source (and maybe a little more detail about the matter), it can be put back, but it should be in the "Early life" section where it would fit better.
- 00:31 00:31, 7 October 2015 diff hist −39 Atomic demolition munition →Military uses: "Recent" is subjective/ambiguous. Also, the source of a purported fact is usually off topic for inclusion in text (as is so here). Source is given here (properly) via the inline citations. Reworded to straightforwardly state the fact.
6 October 2015
- 23:48 23:48, 6 October 2015 diff hist +2 Castle Bravo →Fallout: American spelling. Subject is more American than British, the rest of the article is also already established in American style. Also, the error was America's fault so we should take ALL the blame! Right? :-)
5 October 2015
- 09:14 09:14, 5 October 2015 diff hist +28 Dan Carlin →Background: Tagged unsourced. It's also unsourced in the Lynn Carlin article.
- 09:12 09:12, 5 October 2015 diff hist +28 Lynn Carlin →Personal life: Tagged unsourced.
- 09:07 09:07, 5 October 2015 diff hist +42 Dan Carlin →Hardcore History: Tagged section OR
- 09:07 09:07, 5 October 2015 diff hist +42 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Tagged section "OR"
- 09:00 09:00, 5 October 2015 diff hist −15 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: subjective
- 09:00 09:00, 5 October 2015 diff hist −2 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: typo
- 08:59 08:59, 5 October 2015 diff hist −120 Dan Carlin →Background: subjective "frequently", "among highest ranked"
- 08:58 08:58, 5 October 2015 diff hist −26 Dan Carlin →Background: "last dozen years" is ambiguous without a "current" time given.
- 08:56 08:56, 5 October 2015 diff hist −154 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Almost the whole article is unsourced original analysis. There are a few "factual" statements (but still unsourced!). This is OR and subjective in addition to the usual unsourced.
- 08:51 08:51, 5 October 2015 diff hist −294 Dan Carlin →Common Sense: Removed unsourced original analysis.
- 08:46 08:46, 5 October 2015 diff hist −650 Dan Carlin Removed unsourced original analysis Tag: section blanking
30 September 2015
- 17:55 17:55, 30 September 2015 diff hist +121 Nuclear winter →Early work: Added tag. The data so nicely plotted up here is ''not verifiable'' because it's source is unstated.
- 17:53 17:53, 30 September 2015 diff hist +120 Effects of nuclear explosions →Other phenomena: Added tag. The data so nicely plotted up here is ''not verifiable'' because it's source is unstated.
29 September 2015
- 20:51 20:51, 29 September 2015 diff hist −11 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: What's "ironic" is subjective. Usage in this way is unencyclopedic.
- 20:49 20:49, 29 September 2015 diff hist −4 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: Split up long single-paragraph. This section needs trimming down.
- 20:46 20:46, 29 September 2015 diff hist −147 Radio-controlled aircraft →Pylon racers: Makes no sense. A *large* wing generally is better at maintaining speed under load (i.e.in a turn). "Clean airframe" is good in all phases, and has no extra advantage under load.
- 20:39 20:39, 29 September 2015 diff hist −196 Radio-controlled aircraft →Sailplanes and gliders: Removed ambiguous extraneous commentary (hard to figure out the intended meaning, not that important anyway).
- 20:26 20:26, 29 September 2015 diff hist −2,105 Radio-controlled aircraft Rmvd dubious "wing location" theses. What's "easy to fly" is OR and dubious + ambiguous. Vertical CG affects dihedral effect, but not so much that it can't be compensated for by increased dihedral angle, etc. Conclusions about mid-wing were just nutty.
- 20:11 20:11, 29 September 2015 diff hist −94 Radio-controlled aircraft →High-wing planes: removed ref which was a link to a list of offerings by a vendor. If not simply promotional, it's a primary source making the conclusion original research.
- 17:09 17:09, 29 September 2015 diff hist −34 Mother Earth News Sentence smithing. Split up run-on (it was a long single-sentence paragraph). "Saner" is still problematic (POV). "Better", "meaningfull" are also still subjective.
- 03:25 03:25, 29 September 2015 diff hist −3 Plitvice Lakes National Park fixed misuse of ", but".
- 03:24 03:24, 29 September 2015 diff hist −8 Plitvice Lakes National Park presumptuous to state how clear something is to the reader
- 03:22 03:22, 29 September 2015 diff hist −21 Plitvice Lakes National Park →Influence of the vegetation: More encyclopedic style.
- 03:18 03:18, 29 September 2015 diff hist −27 Plitvice Lakes National Park →Thresholds become barriers: What's "long ago" or "not so" is subjective.
- 03:08 03:08, 29 September 2015 diff hist −26 Plitvice Lakes National Park vague, unimportant for lede
28 September 2015
- 03:09 03:09, 28 September 2015 diff hist −24 Copenhagen Suborbitals →Tycho Deep Space: simplified unnecessary description
- 01:11 01:11, 28 September 2015 diff hist −15 Vladimir Pozner Jr. →Personal life: What's "interesting" is subjective, unencyclopedic. If it's notable and well-enough ref'd, then simply say it as a fact. "Interestingly," is magazine-article style, not encyclopedic style.
- 01:02 01:02, 28 September 2015 diff hist −137 Vladimir Pozner Jr. →Personal life: Removed uncited info about living person. See wp:BLP. If anything needs good refs, a living person's religious views better damn well have damn good ones. :-) ..
- 00:53 00:53, 28 September 2015 diff hist −116 Phil Donahue →The Phil Donahue Show: Uncited, ambiguous, "is known for" is WP:weasel hiding the lack of a source *stating* he started "shock journalism".
- 00:49 00:49, 28 September 2015 diff hist +17 Phil Donahue →The Phil Donahue Show: Removed off-topic digression. Adjusted time setting of the remark to not be open ended. (left the commentary hidden (vs. deleting) so as to serve editing after 2015 when those "results are in")
23 September 2015
- 04:59 04:59, 23 September 2015 diff hist −17 Gorongosa National Park →Hydrology: Removed unencyclopedic extraneous frill ("given life").
- 04:57 04:57, 23 September 2015 diff hist −47 Gorongosa National Park →Geology: Removed subjective "most dramatic". "Yet another" presumes an expectation on the reader about what would be "enough".
- 04:53 04:53, 23 September 2015 diff hist −8 Gorongosa National Park →Geology: removed unencyclopedic frill ("nestled")
- 04:43 04:43, 23 September 2015 diff hist +2 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: fixed my mis-formatting
- 04:41 04:41, 23 September 2015 diff hist −27 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed POV tag after long contentious discussion on the talk page. (That's dry humor folks.)
- 04:39 04:39, 23 September 2015 diff hist +284 Talk:Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa
- 04:34 04:34, 23 September 2015 diff hist −1,020 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed unsourced POV blather complained about in the tag. Stuck to the basic facts rather than the "verdant land" "peaceful people" subjective POV drivel. The "2000 people" fact could use a citation.
- 04:29 04:29, 23 September 2015 diff hist −60 Gorongosa National Park →Mount Gorongosa: Removed dubious POV photo. Photo doesn't appear to be clearcut anything, area is small, it looks more like a natural process. Dire unsourced POV assertions in its metadata casts additional doubt.
- 03:37 03:37, 23 September 2015 diff hist +120 File:Gorongosa clearcut.jpg →Licensing: typo and sign
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