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This article has a bunch of issues, and I would currently be surprised if it was accepted in AFC.
First, the lead section is:
Second, the article is a bit too long:
Third, the formatting is extremely hard to follow:
Finally, the sourcing needs improvement:
@ 27 is the best number Starship SN20 ( talk) 13:17, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
The reason should be obvious. Why didn't I do it myself? To preserve the histories of both pages. 27 is my favorite number. You can ask me why here. 16:22, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
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This article has a bunch of issues, and I would currently be surprised if it was accepted in AFC.
First, the lead section is:
Second, the article is a bit too long:
Third, the formatting is extremely hard to follow:
Finally, the sourcing needs improvement:
@ 27 is the best number Starship SN20 ( talk) 13:17, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
The reason should be obvious. Why didn't I do it myself? To preserve the histories of both pages. 27 is my favorite number. You can ask me why here. 16:22, 1 March 2023 (UTC)