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Hi User:InformationToKnowledge, I don't know what your plan is with this article now that it has been declined. It's disappointing when that happens and I wish the reviewer had supplied a little more detail. But in any case, I think the article needs to be narrowed down a bit. It should focus on the recent decline. Similar to Decline in insect populations and Decline in amphibian populations: They don't talk about declines or extinctions from pre-history times. Therefore I would delete the entire section: "Quaternary megafauna extinctions" as I think that's another topic. What you have there is anyway mostly excerpts, so the same as at the other article on Quaternary extinction event. In general, I don't think it's good practice to mix an excerpt with new text, like you did in this section: "Quaternary megafauna extinctions". I think it's better if it's clear where the excerpt ends and new text begins. EMsmile ( talk) 06:58, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
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Hi User:InformationToKnowledge, I don't know what your plan is with this article now that it has been declined. It's disappointing when that happens and I wish the reviewer had supplied a little more detail. But in any case, I think the article needs to be narrowed down a bit. It should focus on the recent decline. Similar to Decline in insect populations and Decline in amphibian populations: They don't talk about declines or extinctions from pre-history times. Therefore I would delete the entire section: "Quaternary megafauna extinctions" as I think that's another topic. What you have there is anyway mostly excerpts, so the same as at the other article on Quaternary extinction event. In general, I don't think it's good practice to mix an excerpt with new text, like you did in this section: "Quaternary megafauna extinctions". I think it's better if it's clear where the excerpt ends and new text begins. EMsmile ( talk) 06:58, 21 September 2023 (UTC)