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Comment: Of your references, I think one contains a reference which is about Newmark, at least one is about what he says, something we are not interested in, one refers to Newman(!) and the rest do not even mention him 🇺🇦
FiddleTimtrent
FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 14:07, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This is presented as a
WP:ROTM businessman doing his job. 🇺🇦
FiddleTimtrent
FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:18, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Robert Newmark | |
|---|---|
| Born | 7 November 1952 |
| Occupation | Restaurateur |
| Children | 3 |
Robert Newmark (born 1952) is a British-born London restaurateur, nicknamed 'The King of Clubs'. [1] He has been instrumental in the ownership and management of several renowned hospitality establishments across London, most notably the iconic restaurant Beach Blanket Babylon in Notting Hill, Additionally, Newmark created and owned the celebrated Freedom Bar in Soho. His son Rex Newmark appeared in the 2009 series of Big Brother (British TV series) series 9
Career
Restaurants and Bars
Newmark has been active in the London hospitality scene since the 1970s. In that time, he has opened several restaurants and bars. These include Sloanes Cafe in Knightsbridge, Bill Stickers, Mondo Bar, Freedom Bar Soho, The O Bar, Titanic (restaurant), Boneyard [2], West Thirty Six [3], Beach Blanket Babylon Shoreditch [4] and Beach Blanket Babylon Notting Hill [5]
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References
- ^ Purves, Nick (2010-12-06). "Robert Newmark: King of Clubs". thelondonword.com/.
- ^ "Not your average Shoreditch burger bar, Boneyard London is serving up a real meat feast". Culture Whisperer. Retrieved 2022-12-13.
- ^ "A New London Restaurant Has the Feel of a Chic Clubhouse". Architectural Digest. 2015-03-31. Retrieved 2016-12-28.
- ^ "Beach Blanket Babylon, 19-23 Bethnal Green Road, London". The Times. 2008-01-13. Retrieved 2016-12-28.
- ^ "10 Most Stylish Cocktail Bars in London". Huffington Post. 2016-11-02. Retrieved 2016-12-28.
| Submission declined on 3 May 2024 by
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| Submission declined on 2 May 2024 by
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qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published,
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- Comment: Of your references, I think one contains a reference which is about Newmark, at least one is about what he says, something we are not interested in, one refers to Newman(!) and the rest do not even mention him 🇺🇦
FiddleTimtrent
FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 14:07, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This is presented as a
WP:ROTM businessman doing his job. 🇺🇦
FiddleTimtrent
FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:18, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Robert Newmark | |
|---|---|
| Born | 7 November 1952 |
| Occupation | Restaurateur |
| Children | 3 |
Robert Newmark (born 1952) is a British-born London restaurateur, nicknamed 'The King of Clubs'. [1] He has been instrumental in the ownership and management of several renowned hospitality establishments across London, most notably the iconic restaurant Beach Blanket Babylon in Notting Hill, Additionally, Newmark created and owned the celebrated Freedom Bar in Soho. His son Rex Newmark appeared in the 2009 series of Big Brother (British TV series) series 9
Career
Restaurants and Bars
Newmark has been active in the London hospitality scene since the 1970s. In that time, he has opened several restaurants and bars. These include Sloanes Cafe in Knightsbridge, Bill Stickers, Mondo Bar, Freedom Bar Soho, The O Bar, Titanic (restaurant), Boneyard [2], West Thirty Six [3], Beach Blanket Babylon Shoreditch [4] and Beach Blanket Babylon Notting Hill [5]
References
- ^ Purves, Nick (2010-12-06). "Robert Newmark: King of Clubs". thelondonword.com/.
- ^ "Not your average Shoreditch burger bar, Boneyard London is serving up a real meat feast". Culture Whisperer. Retrieved 2022-12-13.
- ^ "A New London Restaurant Has the Feel of a Chic Clubhouse". Architectural Digest. 2015-03-31. Retrieved 2016-12-28.
- ^ "Beach Blanket Babylon, 19-23 Bethnal Green Road, London". The Times. 2008-01-13. Retrieved 2016-12-28.
- ^ "10 Most Stylish Cocktail Bars in London". Huffington Post. 2016-11-02. Retrieved 2016-12-28.