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LASERVISION is a multimedia entertainment company specialising in creating unique experiences globally. Headquartered in Sydney, Australia, the company also has offices in Dubai and Hong Kong. Since being founded in 1984 by Paul McCloskey, LASERVISION has created many shows, for example, the Illuminate Light & Laser Spectacular at Dreamworld in 2010. As well, they have produced and installed numerous permanent attractions, for example, A Symphony of Lights in Hong Kong, special events, and LUNA Light Journeys. Some of the clients LASERVISION has worked with include Al-Futtaim, MerryLand Quy Nhon, Aldar Properties, Transport for NSW, The Venetian Macau, Shellharbour City Council, Cairns Regional Council, Brisbane City Council, City of Melbourne, and City of Joondalup.
LASERVISION achieved two Guinness World Records, the 'World's Largest Water Screen Projection' in December 2016 for IMAGINE at Dubai Festival City [1], as well as the 'World's Largest Light & Sound Show' for A Symphony of Lights in Hong Kong in 2005. [2] [3]
LASERVISION has also won 'Creative Department of the Year' and 'Technical Innovation of the Year' awards at the 14th Annual International Business Awards as well as, 'Major Event of the Year' from Parks and Leisure Australia for The Enchanted Garden in 2022 [4] along with 'Best Public Event' from Australian Event Awards for the same show.
The Enchanted Garden, Roma Street Parkland, Brisbane [5]
Aurora, Albury Botanic Gardens, Albury [6]
Reef Lights, Cairns Festival, Cairns [7]
The Enchanted Forest, Blackbutt Forest Reserve, Shellharbour [8]
Awaken, Rosalind Park, Bendigo [9]
Yana Waingi, Riverside Park, Swan Hill [10]
Firewalk, Firelight Festival, Singleton [11]
Radiance, Rockhampton Botanic Gardens, Rockhampton [12]
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Submission declined on 5 September 2023 by
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LASERVISION is a multimedia entertainment company specialising in creating unique experiences globally. Headquartered in Sydney, Australia, the company also has offices in Dubai and Hong Kong. Since being founded in 1984 by Paul McCloskey, LASERVISION has created many shows, for example, the Illuminate Light & Laser Spectacular at Dreamworld in 2010. As well, they have produced and installed numerous permanent attractions, for example, A Symphony of Lights in Hong Kong, special events, and LUNA Light Journeys. Some of the clients LASERVISION has worked with include Al-Futtaim, MerryLand Quy Nhon, Aldar Properties, Transport for NSW, The Venetian Macau, Shellharbour City Council, Cairns Regional Council, Brisbane City Council, City of Melbourne, and City of Joondalup.
LASERVISION achieved two Guinness World Records, the 'World's Largest Water Screen Projection' in December 2016 for IMAGINE at Dubai Festival City [1], as well as the 'World's Largest Light & Sound Show' for A Symphony of Lights in Hong Kong in 2005. [2] [3]
LASERVISION has also won 'Creative Department of the Year' and 'Technical Innovation of the Year' awards at the 14th Annual International Business Awards as well as, 'Major Event of the Year' from Parks and Leisure Australia for The Enchanted Garden in 2022 [4] along with 'Best Public Event' from Australian Event Awards for the same show.
The Enchanted Garden, Roma Street Parkland, Brisbane [5]
Aurora, Albury Botanic Gardens, Albury [6]
Reef Lights, Cairns Festival, Cairns [7]
The Enchanted Forest, Blackbutt Forest Reserve, Shellharbour [8]
Awaken, Rosalind Park, Bendigo [9]
Yana Waingi, Riverside Park, Swan Hill [10]
Firewalk, Firelight Festival, Singleton [11]
Radiance, Rockhampton Botanic Gardens, Rockhampton [12]
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