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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 02:40, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He was a key member of Philadelphia's defense for several years, and along with Bill Bergey and John Bunting led oneadd a comma after "Bunting"
He helped them reach Super Bowl XV in 1980, and was selectedno comma needed
However, he missed 1983 due to injury and was traded to the San Francisco 49ers in 1984, and did not make the team, after which he retired.kind of a run-on sentence, consider splitting into two.
He attended Bryan Station High School, and despite seeing major action only in his last two seasons, compiled 40 touchdowns, 3,000 yards, and helped them reach the Class AA state finals while playing fullback.->
He attended Bryan Station High School where he played fullback and halfback for the football team. Despite seeing major action only in his last two seasons, he compiled 40 touchdowns, 3,000 yards, and helped the team reach the Class AA state finals.
He spent his freshman year at his high school position before changing to halfback as a sophomorenot sure what this means. Do you mean he played fullback his freshman year? if so, just say that.
After graduating, LeMaster played four seasons for the Kentucky Wildcats from 1970 to 1973.add in "of college football" after "seasons"
However, he was named All-American at the end of the year, and was invited through the effortsI would recommend splitting into two sentences ->
He was also invited through the efforts...
started all four preseason games, and ended upno comma needed
consecutive games with Philadelphia, and he also led the teamno comma needed
strike-shortened 1982 season, and LeMaster missed the entireno comma needed
LeMaster played 129 games and started 115 in his career, and posted 10 interceptions, which he returned for 190 yards and two touchdowns.recommend breaking into two sentences
LeMaster worked for Enron Energy Services in the Philadelphia area among other businessescomma after "among"
With his wife, Marylou, LeMaster had three children.->
LeMaster and his wife Marlou had three children.
Nice work. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:41, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
Frank LeMaster has been listed as one of the
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A news item involving Frank LeMaster was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the In the news section on 28 March 2023. |
A fact from Frank LeMaster appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 6 May 2023 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot ( talk) 18:59, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
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talk) 18:07, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:53, 27 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Frank LeMaster; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 02:40, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
« Gonzo fan2007
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He was a key member of Philadelphia's defense for several years, and along with Bill Bergey and John Bunting led oneadd a comma after "Bunting"
He helped them reach Super Bowl XV in 1980, and was selectedno comma needed
However, he missed 1983 due to injury and was traded to the San Francisco 49ers in 1984, and did not make the team, after which he retired.kind of a run-on sentence, consider splitting into two.
He attended Bryan Station High School, and despite seeing major action only in his last two seasons, compiled 40 touchdowns, 3,000 yards, and helped them reach the Class AA state finals while playing fullback.->
He attended Bryan Station High School where he played fullback and halfback for the football team. Despite seeing major action only in his last two seasons, he compiled 40 touchdowns, 3,000 yards, and helped the team reach the Class AA state finals.
He spent his freshman year at his high school position before changing to halfback as a sophomorenot sure what this means. Do you mean he played fullback his freshman year? if so, just say that.
After graduating, LeMaster played four seasons for the Kentucky Wildcats from 1970 to 1973.add in "of college football" after "seasons"
However, he was named All-American at the end of the year, and was invited through the effortsI would recommend splitting into two sentences ->
He was also invited through the efforts...
started all four preseason games, and ended upno comma needed
consecutive games with Philadelphia, and he also led the teamno comma needed
strike-shortened 1982 season, and LeMaster missed the entireno comma needed
LeMaster played 129 games and started 115 in his career, and posted 10 interceptions, which he returned for 190 yards and two touchdowns.recommend breaking into two sentences
LeMaster worked for Enron Energy Services in the Philadelphia area among other businessescomma after "among"
With his wife, Marylou, LeMaster had three children.->
LeMaster and his wife Marlou had three children.
Nice work. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:41, 23 August 2023 (UTC)