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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 March 2020 and 28 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dsalvarez. Peer reviewers: Rluna2020.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 18:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
I’ll be editing this page as part of a Wikipedia elective course at UCSF. In general I will aim to bolster this page with more up to date and focused introduction to childhood chronic illness, especially since right now it seems to focus mostly on pain and psychological consequences of the topic. I will write for the general audience and avoid medical jargon. I will aim to write about chronic illnesses as a general group and not delve into one particular diagnosis (ie cancer).
Some resources will be literature reviews on the perspective of siblings, parent interventions, and global burden of pediatric chronic diseases and a systematic review of quality of life in affected patients.
My work plan is as follows:
Hello, Wikipedia community! I’m a medical student who will be reviewing and providing feedback on this article as part of our Wikipedia elective. At the start of the elective, this page was rated as a C-Class, high-importance article. The editor user:Dsalvarez had the following goals:
I will be providing user:Dsalvarez with feedback on her recent edits to the lead paragraphs and the new content sections in accordance with the manual of styles.
General impression: You’re doing excellent work. Based on the original plan, it looks like most of the stated goals have been accomplished. The lead paragraph is well-developed and includes a more general description of childhood chronic illness, and a clear definition that describes its duration and its contrast to acute illness. Most of the sentences in the lead paragraph are cited properly with reliable literature sources. In terms of your page’s content, you have made significant progress by adding an epidemiology, impact and management section which multiple subsections for each.
Constructive feedback for lead section and content:
Overall, you've made great progress. I enjoyed reading your page. Keep up the great work, and let me know if you have any questions! Rluna2020 ( talk) 04:57, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 August 2022 and 20 September 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Javarcia, Jvb26, Mhsiddeek, EBPS rulez ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Asingh238, Y.s.a.law, Aevallej, Ella.olgin.
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This article is rated C-class on Wikipedia's
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 March 2020 and 28 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dsalvarez. Peer reviewers: Rluna2020.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 18:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
I’ll be editing this page as part of a Wikipedia elective course at UCSF. In general I will aim to bolster this page with more up to date and focused introduction to childhood chronic illness, especially since right now it seems to focus mostly on pain and psychological consequences of the topic. I will write for the general audience and avoid medical jargon. I will aim to write about chronic illnesses as a general group and not delve into one particular diagnosis (ie cancer).
Some resources will be literature reviews on the perspective of siblings, parent interventions, and global burden of pediatric chronic diseases and a systematic review of quality of life in affected patients.
My work plan is as follows:
Hello, Wikipedia community! I’m a medical student who will be reviewing and providing feedback on this article as part of our Wikipedia elective. At the start of the elective, this page was rated as a C-Class, high-importance article. The editor user:Dsalvarez had the following goals:
I will be providing user:Dsalvarez with feedback on her recent edits to the lead paragraphs and the new content sections in accordance with the manual of styles.
General impression: You’re doing excellent work. Based on the original plan, it looks like most of the stated goals have been accomplished. The lead paragraph is well-developed and includes a more general description of childhood chronic illness, and a clear definition that describes its duration and its contrast to acute illness. Most of the sentences in the lead paragraph are cited properly with reliable literature sources. In terms of your page’s content, you have made significant progress by adding an epidemiology, impact and management section which multiple subsections for each.
Constructive feedback for lead section and content:
Overall, you've made great progress. I enjoyed reading your page. Keep up the great work, and let me know if you have any questions! Rluna2020 ( talk) 04:57, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 August 2022 and 20 September 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Javarcia, Jvb26, Mhsiddeek, EBPS rulez ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Asingh238, Y.s.a.law, Aevallej, Ella.olgin.
— Assignment last updated by Y.s.a.law ( talk) 16:56, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
Workplan for WikiEdits Project UCSF Fall 2022
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Jvb26 (
talk •
contribs) 18:41, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
— Assignment last updated by
EBPS rulez (
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Feedback for Wiki Education assignment: UCSF SOM Inquiry In Action-- Wikipedia Editing 2022