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There is a citation tool within Wikipedia so you do not need to number it yourself. I would take the first sentence out, since we are supposed to be giving information. The first sentence is a justification for further study in the subject. This is great for a journal article but doesn't fit for a Wikipedia article. You did a great job in describing the different types of grief and ways to treat it. As you keep on writing, it might be helpful to extend on how grief in children looks different than adult grief. thou
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It may be very interesting to include a developmental perspective when speaking about "children," and how they experience loss. Surely, a 2-year-old child and a 12-year-old child would have different conceptualizations and reactions to loss. Further, treatment considerations for various developmental states would likely be very different.
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There is a citation tool within Wikipedia so you do not need to number it yourself. I would take the first sentence out, since we are supposed to be giving information. The first sentence is a justification for further study in the subject. This is great for a journal article but doesn't fit for a Wikipedia article. You did a great job in describing the different types of grief and ways to treat it. As you keep on writing, it might be helpful to extend on how grief in children looks different than adult grief. thou
RebekahJazdzewski (
talk) 17:41, 1 November 2017 (UTC)reply
It may be very interesting to include a developmental perspective when speaking about "children," and how they experience loss. Surely, a 2-year-old child and a 12-year-old child would have different conceptualizations and reactions to loss. Further, treatment considerations for various developmental states would likely be very different.
LayvenRegueroMEd (
talk) 03:46, 2 November 2017 (UTC)reply