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Made mostly superficial edits, correcting grammar and sentence structure. More substantial changes:
Most "life extensionists" believe the human life span can be multiplied for already living persons.
Some say that it is enough only to make aging healthy and prolong healthspan - duration of life when person lives without serious illnesses
(I tried to incorporate non-opinion-based elements of the second sentence into the one following it).
I also removed some other smaller sentences that seemed out of place or detracted from the discourse. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sparrigan ( talk • contribs) 19:55, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
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Made mostly superficial edits, correcting grammar and sentence structure. More substantial changes:
Most "life extensionists" believe the human life span can be multiplied for already living persons.
Some say that it is enough only to make aging healthy and prolong healthspan - duration of life when person lives without serious illnesses
(I tried to incorporate non-opinion-based elements of the second sentence into the one following it).
I also removed some other smaller sentences that seemed out of place or detracted from the discourse. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sparrigan ( talk • contribs) 19:55, 20 April 2021 (UTC)