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Putting on hold (mostly for my own internal accounting), expect this to be done soon! Nice work. — Kusma ( talk) 11:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
in a geometrical layoutwhat does that mean? (what would a non-geometrical layout look like?)
large signs behind the glassThis confused me a little, I couldn't understand what kind of signs would be required on the inside ("no climbing this building dressed as spiderman"?) From the bit I looked at in the source, there is some requirement to have billboards or neon signs or something? The billboards do not seem to be behind the glass, but in front of it (or are we looking from the inside?). Please clarify.
The Solomons had originally hired William A. White/Grubb & Ellis as the brokers, but they subsequently hired Cushman & Wakefield as the new brokers in January 1990.maybe don't repeat "hired ... as the brokers" but use something like "replaced them by Cushman & Wakefield".
9×10^6 sq ftnothing against scientific notation, but it seems a but out of place here ("9 million sq ft"?).
A president of a Spanish bank offered to paythis almost makes it sound like he was acting in personal capacity.
Newmark Real Estate was looking for tenantsWhy are they suddenly involved?
it still needed around 250,000 sq ft (23,000 m2)who is "it" in this sentence?
the concentration of so many workers in a small area had become a liabilityI'm not sure "liability" is the best way to describe this. The NY Times just suggests that some people thought it was not a good idea to have all your workers in one place. It seems more about risk mitigation?
@ Kusma: Thanks for the detailed review; I really appreciate it. I have now addressed all the points you've brought up. Epicgenius ( talk) 16:16, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
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Putting on hold (mostly for my own internal accounting), expect this to be done soon! Nice work. — Kusma ( talk) 11:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
in a geometrical layoutwhat does that mean? (what would a non-geometrical layout look like?)
large signs behind the glassThis confused me a little, I couldn't understand what kind of signs would be required on the inside ("no climbing this building dressed as spiderman"?) From the bit I looked at in the source, there is some requirement to have billboards or neon signs or something? The billboards do not seem to be behind the glass, but in front of it (or are we looking from the inside?). Please clarify.
The Solomons had originally hired William A. White/Grubb & Ellis as the brokers, but they subsequently hired Cushman & Wakefield as the new brokers in January 1990.maybe don't repeat "hired ... as the brokers" but use something like "replaced them by Cushman & Wakefield".
9×10^6 sq ftnothing against scientific notation, but it seems a but out of place here ("9 million sq ft"?).
A president of a Spanish bank offered to paythis almost makes it sound like he was acting in personal capacity.
Newmark Real Estate was looking for tenantsWhy are they suddenly involved?
it still needed around 250,000 sq ft (23,000 m2)who is "it" in this sentence?
the concentration of so many workers in a small area had become a liabilityI'm not sure "liability" is the best way to describe this. The NY Times just suggests that some people thought it was not a good idea to have all your workers in one place. It seems more about risk mitigation?
@ Kusma: Thanks for the detailed review; I really appreciate it. I have now addressed all the points you've brought up. Epicgenius ( talk) 16:16, 19 June 2022 (UTC)