17:1617:16, 11 October 2019diffhist−249
McKamey Manor
→Criticisms: Removed entire second part under BLP. Watched the videos on the website and nothing has him admitting on-screen. Someone needs to view movie, cite movie (not movie's website), and re-add this.
17:1117:11, 11 October 2019diffhist−99
McKamey Manor
→Criticisms: Removed second part under BLP. Need to go to source to video this. No editorial or review mentions this even though they mention ex-felons. The source does not work anyway as the person just linked to the movie.
17:1017:10, 11 October 2019diffhist−107
McKamey Manor
Title was not necessary. Broke into sections. Also, changed lead of section to reflect what the source says and that it is an opinion piece.
16:5816:58, 11 October 2019diffhist−157
McKamey Manor
Fixed formatting for references and improved article. Also, statement about suing not in source, and that source is a blog. Removed information.
17:1617:16, 11 October 2019diffhist−249
McKamey Manor
→Criticisms: Removed entire second part under BLP. Watched the videos on the website and nothing has him admitting on-screen. Someone needs to view movie, cite movie (not movie's website), and re-add this.
17:1117:11, 11 October 2019diffhist−99
McKamey Manor
→Criticisms: Removed second part under BLP. Need to go to source to video this. No editorial or review mentions this even though they mention ex-felons. The source does not work anyway as the person just linked to the movie.
17:1017:10, 11 October 2019diffhist−107
McKamey Manor
Title was not necessary. Broke into sections. Also, changed lead of section to reflect what the source says and that it is an opinion piece.
16:5816:58, 11 October 2019diffhist−157
McKamey Manor
Fixed formatting for references and improved article. Also, statement about suing not in source, and that source is a blog. Removed information.